| "Family Connections Lemon Side Story" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_my_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! Please write more to this fic!!! I love it soooooo much! I would very much appreciate it if you could make anothere chapter! PLEASE! How can you say no to this face?
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Title: Family Connections Lemon Side Story
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a totally kawaii fic!! There should be a sequel or another chapter to this!! I just love the way you had that planned, and just when Tohru was about to reach the first peak of getting to the top of the mountain, she couldn't get there. That part was just kind of sad though...but she can always continue from where she left off, right? lol. Hope you write more to this story! Tchao!!
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Reviewed By: the mysterious cheesy On: February 08, 2005 05:05 CST
Comment/Review:
do you know how disconcerting it is to read a lemon like this and have Jungle Love by The Time play on the radio?
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Reviewed By: Nikshi On: April 20, 2004 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much...and I really wish it wasn't a oneshot... I'd be very happy if you continued...or if you made sequel. I hope you have time to write more stories!
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Reviewed By: iLoveHarU On: April 18, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaawwww...Poor horny Tohru!Hahaha...Man,I wanted to know what happened next.Oh well!I loved your story.Very,*ahem**ahem*
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