| "A Time to Heal" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: vbollman@yahoo.com On: September 01, 2005 22:54 CDT
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interesting way to get the inu brothers together. and bringing them down to the same level. when can we expect a new chapter?
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Title: very good story
Reviewed By: nightskies On: October 25, 2004 12:29 CDT
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your story is very good please update soon!
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Title: i luv your story
Reviewed By: darkangelblackwings On: October 24, 2004 22:56 CDT
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your story is so cool!!! please update soon i'll be waiting :)!!
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Title: cool story
Reviewed By: sliverstar On: October 24, 2004 18:57 CDT
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your story is very cool o don't understand why no one has really reviewed it but i do love it^_^ anyway please update soon i like your story you don't have to change a thing about it!!!! ja ne^_~
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 16:52 CDT
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ha ha! sesshie has to stay on the flor all night! ^_^...o.o oh right, a review. well, i kinda agree with the whole italicizing and the more detail thing. otherwise you're doing pretty good. i like the storyline, it's cool! update soon please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: July 27, 2004 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE DETAIL!!! Speech is fine, but we need to know who's talking!! This is potentially a great story, but the enjoyment is lessened by the lack of detail. Please fix this.
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 19:55 CDT
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Eh heh...[sweatdrop] That should be chapter 13... The (now humbled) editor!
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to revise this chapter, A-chan. You need to either boldface And Now, For Something Completely Different...From the Editor?!?!? or italicize it... But your writing has always been impeccable, if not always legible :p The Editor!
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