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| "White Noise" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lamename On: July 31, 2004 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Chp.7 LOL I LOVE chp.7 i Cant stop cryin' I ended up rollin' round on the floor laughin' my head off. I Thank U For Making Me Laugh. (first time i've laughed in at least 2 months)
| Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: July 28, 2004 02:36 CDT
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I had to leave you a review because I have been excessively truant recently and for that I apologize. I love your Aya-san! If he's based on you, then go Team You! His thoughts are alternately brilliant and hilarious...but he's still Captain Leader Guy on the outside. Joy! As always, I approve most happily of your Ken and Yoji (KY -- love that!) torture, since they're my favorite kitties. Maybe that's twisted, but I always want a happy, fluffy, citrusy ending for them as well, so maybe that balances it(?). And your bastardly Schu is most appealing...I love it when he's written as a manipulative, powerful bastard. But I am putting in my vote right now that he not get to keep the beloved Yoji! In any case, I'm in love with this story. Please don't leave it too long without an update. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: CC On: July 20, 2004 21:43 CDT
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Well crap. now you have me contemplating bellybuttons. Oh well, I've had stranger thoughts. Anyway, back to...errr, starting the review. This looks like it's going to be a great story, you need to update though! Poor Yohji, all lusted after with no knowledge of it. Wish I was in that position. Keep writing, great fic so far. oh, and thanks for the KY comment. I had never thought of that before. Very funny and oh so true! Ja, CC
| Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 26, 2004 11:20 CDT
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Black Kitten, you're incredibly intelligent, or I'm incredibly predictable. Let's go with a mix of both. Anyway, so yes, you happen to be an oracle or a telepath, your choice, but still, go you! Not saying you got everything right, but still, most of it ^____^
| Reviewed By: Black Kittens Dream [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 07:07 CDT
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*looool* Gods, that was so funny!!! I was grinning the whole time, your mixture of dark moments and humour is great! There's too much going on in this chapter to make quotes. I loved the sarcasm of Omi and Aya, the whole idea of showing the scene through two POVs is great. I wonder what Ken's POV would be, but then it would be a parody instead of drama/angst or whatever it is. *g* And Omi's plea to Aya to not kill Yohji was hilarious. Or Aya's thought that Yohji had committed seppuku... "Another Fujimiya joke that will go unnoticed." *lol* And Ken was aroused by the situation? Oi, I don't think that Ken's such a pervert so maybe it was Schu who was manipulating him, maybe even watched the whole thing through Ken's eyes and reflected so his own arousal into him? Nah, sorry, I just love to make theories about what's going on or what could happen next.--- And I can't believe it. Your Ken is just as helpless as mine in let's-call-it-a stress situation. Ah, I'm going to update tomorrow so you'll see what I mean.--- Loved the chapter!!! Two thumbs up!!! Black Kitten
| Reviewed By: Anna Hibiki On: May 21, 2004 03:06 CDT
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I just discovered this fic, and have to say I like it ^__^ Update soon!
| Title: oh yeah
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 19, 2004 01:07 CDT
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Tygrrlyli578 is one of my other names. It's for when I'm too lazy to log in. Yeah, I really am just that lazy.
| Title: comas?
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 19, 2004 01:06 CDT
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Everybody in that show pullls the coma bit. It's like a way to initiate people into WK. Hey, that might be an idea. Anyway, okay, have to really REALLY thank people for reviewing cause it happifying. And I think I wrote Aya kinda based on me. I am called a frigid bitch. Though, Aya has far more thought than I do, not much happens behind these eyes. Thanks for the reviews everyone!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah, I'd have to say Aya's point of view was the most hysterical to read. and everybody thinks he's so quiet! We just need to be inside his head! Anyway, yeah it's an awesome fic... to be attacked in your dreams, where you can't escape. Poor Yohji. And better yet - that his teammates made him something that'll make him fall asleep (and even *better* yet, that it's coupled with all that liquor, possibly putting him into a coma). Poor Yohji!
| Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 13:38 CDT
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Wooohoo, I loved it ^_^ Please don't make me wait too long 'cause I'll be checking for updates! Can't wait to find out what'll happen outside of the dream.
| Reviewed By: Black Kitten's Dream On: April 23, 2004 07:46 CDT
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Chapter six... Hm, what can I say?... =^___^=... NICE job. Very hot. *fans herself*... And I almost missed this chapter. *grins* I think I can recommend this story to my beta-reader. She's more Ran obsessed but I know that she'll like the lemon parts. Ah, Yohji's truly a beautiful pet, and Schu's so humanitarian. *lol* Loved it, great chapter! Black Kitten
| Reviewed By: Black Kitten's Dream On: April 23, 2004 07:14 CDT
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*blushes* Wow, that's... nice of you, but you don't have to be that exited just because I reviewed. Believe me I only review stories I really like. *nods* And that brings me to your new chapter. Gimme MORE!!!! Ah, that was really, REALLY nice. Even if Schu is a bastard in there, it's so yummy... in a twisted way. *cough* Oh, I like it. Poor Yohji, I would hug him to make it better but he's a little busy right now. =^___^= Erm... I just discovered that there's another chapter... Gods, I'm dumb. =>_
| Reviewed By: shinigamiseiji On: April 22, 2004 17:03 CDT
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I really like this. I hope you write more and soon ^_^
| Reviewed By: Black Kitten's Dream On: April 19, 2004 07:27 CDT
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Oh! You've made a story!!! Gods, that was good. I love it! And now there's even Schu in it! *happy dance*... Wait a sec... Schu's a bastard in this? *blinks* Oh my, but he can't always the nice guy, ne? =^_~= UPDATE!!! I wanna read more about it! Black Kitten
| Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: April 07, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeease continue with this, it has so much going for it! I'm so happy that it's Ken/Yoji, as they are far and away my favorite kittens and that pairing is nearly impossible to find. So if you would be so wonderful as to keep updating, I will be here for the ride. I love the way you've written Ken and Yoji...and I am very interested to see what kind of horrors Schuldig will inflict upon them. Keep up the wonderful work!
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