| "Delirium and Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i wasn't expecting Q-chan to be connected to the grandfather. i like the story- it played out well.
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Title: crazy!!
Reviewed By: Shiugre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story so odd but good it rocks. You sould write more often especially when you have the flu!!!
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
It would be funny if T-chan and Q-chan both attacked Leon at once...
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great, very disquieting on the first read through, but the second time, I found nuances I missed. I would love to see more chapters from you on this. The subconscious truly is a slippery beast.
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Reviewed By: rilo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, enjoyed it much, but I have only one small nit-pick: Papa D (D's father) has purple eyes, I believe. At least, that's what I've been told by many a person. Sofu's the one with gold eyes.
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Title: way cool
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is way cool, but I was wondering is that the end. I hope not. Will you do a dream sequence for Leon or was this just a one time thing? Zani
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