| "Kenny's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: :P```
Reviewed By: KD On: May 23, 2004 15:37 CDT
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He's short, duh! And if I didn't make you stop, I'd have had to make the chapter longer and I barely managed to write it as it was! Yes, for all you confused ppl out there, this is KD, the author, and *takes out giant bag of marshmallows* as you can see, I love roasted marshmallows, the more flames I get the more marshmallows I get, so it's all good!
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Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: May 23, 2004 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do I have to keep telling you this...I HATE YOU...Why the freak was I bent over??? Thank you, but I am NOT the one to EVER stop making out with Hiei!!! And anpther thing. Why use a gun, when I could use a...hmmm, what to use on Kanna... ... ...*evil smirk* How about...BLACK MAIL!!!!!!!!
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Title: PLEAS!!!
Reviewed By: inu yuyu On: May 18, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS KEEP WRITING OR DIE!!!!!! thanks!
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Title: I HATE YOU
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: May 16, 2004 15:34 CDT
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I hate you Kanna, this is Zyf. You will die soon. I might let you live if you write another chap ASAP, but I dought it. Why are you making me act lie...like Dee or one of them. For anyone who reads this, I am NOT a prep like she's making me out to be. I am the opposite. I will do evil things to Kanna, like...*things* Oh, I got it. Don't worry all. She will be able to write. She'll just have one of her arms coming out of the back of her head, and the other coming from her butt. You heard me Kanna. You will feel PAIN! And I'm not trying to be nasty, just evil...
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Title: FLIP YOU BUTT MUNCH
Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 09:04 CDT
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Yes this is your good friend Sarah again. You started this story before I did mine. Yet I still finished before you and my chapters are longer. You say you have writers block. Here's some insperation, GET ON IT OR DIE
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Title: Helloz
Reviewed By: Frank lol On: April 25, 2004 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey good job next time ask me if im awake to read this got tht!?
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Reviewed By: Ambra On: April 25, 2004 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it please kept riting things like this.
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Title: You're mean
Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:44 CDT
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I can't believe you KD! You're mean! I love the 4th chapter, but I pushed away! YOU SUCK!!! Yes, this is Sarah, and YOU SUCK!!! I wanted a make out scene, but noooooo! I had to freakin` push away!!! YOU SUCK (not going to finish that sentance)!!! I WANT A MAKE OUT SCENE!!! IF YOU HAVE TO GET ME SUSPENDED FOR PDA AT SCHOOL, BUT I WANT MY MAKE OUT SCENE!!! YOU BUTT MUNCH!!!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: She-Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok it has Originality I'll give that but the story needs to keep to the characters personalitys. Other than that its a great story that keeps you guessin....so far.
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: angel girlie On: April 17, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok it has Originality I'll give that but the stoyr needs to keep to the characters personalitys. Other than that its a great story that keeps you guessin....so far.
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Title: Sarusai
Reviewed By: sarusaigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
NEVER!!! See ya later...
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Reviewed By: Koro Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 13:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh dhut up, Sarusai...
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Reviewed By: Sarusai On: April 08, 2004 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
by the way... I'm off my... -evil laughs with head turned to one side. turns back head- ...meds...
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Title: oh Kanna...
Reviewed By: Sarusai On: April 08, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAY TO GO KANNA!!! -goes into a snicker fit- See ya in 7th Hour with Mrs. Felts. -continues snickering and snickers out of the building-
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Title: author
Reviewed By: Koro Duragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
You haven't read or reviewed?! I'm so hurt! *Runs to corner and cries* ~Duragon~
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