| "Kenny's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Go to hell
Reviewed By: Sarah/Zyf On: March 19, 2005 12:39 CST
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You are the most suicidal phycitic bitch that ever got within striking rang of my fist and walked away alive! First it takes you almost SIX F***ING months to write what seems like 1 DAMN page! Then you flatline yourself! I'm going to beat your address out of Amber and find you to hunt you down and beat the living shit out of you! You won't return my e-mails either! I thought you called me a friend, but since you obviously don't I don't have to worry about my damn conciounce after I KILL your sorry ASS! Sorry, I can't spell. Brittany A. says Hellow
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Title: Good, for now
Reviewed By: Sarah/Zyf On: October 28, 2004 13:08 CDT
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I liked it...even though...why would I drag that boy to McDonalds? Never mind. You can't wait that long before putting up the nexxt chapter OK?
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Title: DANG IT
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: September 21, 2004 13:09 CDT
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My internet is down at home and I can't check my email at school........ That does not mean I'm not checking up on this story! You shall die if you don't write more NOW!
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Reviewed By: Aeliak aka Kailea On: July 13, 2004 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story!! I like your choice for poems. Annabel Lee is such a beautiful poem. The plot is a bit slow. e mail me if you want. kaileaspitaleri@hotmail.com I am writing some yyh fics, my name is Aeliak, Okay ^_^
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Title: Hi friend...
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: July 07, 2004 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I've been doing some research...I have a messasge for you friend...Ebi no idaina saigo desu...Translation: How honorably shrimp struggle as they choke to death...meaning: I will choke you in your sleep if you don't write more...I just now read it and over all of summer break you got one I repeat ONE FREAKING CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Steffan On: July 03, 2004 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story so far. I an really enjoying it. Write more, please. Later, Mage_Knight_Caloth
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Reviewed By: Steffan On: July 03, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is son, as in Kurama-son. Not kun. lol. (Yay! my first reveiw here!)
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Title: sorceress of light
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
MY GOD WHAT'S TAKING YOU SO FREKIN' TO UPDATE!!!!HURRY UP ALREADY GEEZ!
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Reviewed By: sorceress of light On: May 23, 2004 21:41 CDT
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HURRY UP AND UPDATE IT SEEMS LIKE FOREVER SINCE THE LAST TIME YOU DID!!!!!AAAAHHHHGGGGG!!!! *bangs head on wall* I'M GOING INSANE!!!
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Title: :P```
Reviewed By: KD On: May 23, 2004 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
He's short, duh! And if I didn't make you stop, I'd have had to make the chapter longer and I barely managed to write it as it was! Yes, for all you confused ppl out there, this is KD, the author, and *takes out giant bag of marshmallows* as you can see, I love roasted marshmallows, the more flames I get the more marshmallows I get, so it's all good!
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Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: May 23, 2004 15:32 CDT
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Do I have to keep telling you this...I HATE YOU...Why the freak was I bent over??? Thank you, but I am NOT the one to EVER stop making out with Hiei!!! And anpther thing. Why use a gun, when I could use a...hmmm, what to use on Kanna... ... ...*evil smirk* How about...BLACK MAIL!!!!!!!!
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Title: PLEAS!!!
Reviewed By: inu yuyu On: May 18, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS!PLEAS KEEP WRITING OR DIE!!!!!! thanks!
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Title: I HATE YOU
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: May 16, 2004 15:34 CDT
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I hate you Kanna, this is Zyf. You will die soon. I might let you live if you write another chap ASAP, but I dought it. Why are you making me act lie...like Dee or one of them. For anyone who reads this, I am NOT a prep like she's making me out to be. I am the opposite. I will do evil things to Kanna, like...*things* Oh, I got it. Don't worry all. She will be able to write. She'll just have one of her arms coming out of the back of her head, and the other coming from her butt. You heard me Kanna. You will feel PAIN! And I'm not trying to be nasty, just evil...
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Title: FLIP YOU BUTT MUNCH
Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 09:04 CDT
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Yes this is your good friend Sarah again. You started this story before I did mine. Yet I still finished before you and my chapters are longer. You say you have writers block. Here's some insperation, GET ON IT OR DIE
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Title: Helloz
Reviewed By: Frank lol On: April 25, 2004 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey good job next time ask me if im awake to read this got tht!?
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