| "Drowning Like the Garden" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sailor Zoisite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cy, baby, you're fantastic! The pollution from making what I assume are the Gundams or something is very clever. I've never read something having to do with what conditions on the colonies would be like that. Veddy good. I like the slow description of Trowa's appearance, too. And I'm a little confused at the end. It looked like Quatre was the one in control, but at the end it seemed like it was Trowa, almost. I really liked this, Cy. To be perfectly honest, you've gotten so much better at writing. Or maybe I've only just read your lemons, but even still, your spelling, punctuation and grammar is beyond better. ^_^ ::Huggles:: I'm so proud of you! This fic is awesome.
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Reviewed By: jubee On: April 06, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
haunting, poetic, and beautiful. your description is nice, not too stuffed with unnecessary frill! it's a smooth ride! thank you for letting me read it :3 :( wish i could say more!
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Reviewed By: Cyrelia J [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 19:32 CDT
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I'm sorry this isn't technically a rating but since I have no other way to respond to an anonymous comment. I'm not going to delete the name Mephisto Walz. They wrote/performed the song "Drowning Like the Garden" it's not my song. If a band wants to waste time emailing me personally about using their song in a fic let them do it. THank you everyone else.
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Reviewed By: Alleyprowler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 14:28 CDT
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Mephisto Waltz doesn't appreciate having her name associated with this type of fic. Would you please edit it out and re-post? Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Anon tip On: April 06, 2004 13:21 CDT
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Just a note- I don't think Mephisto Waltz would be too pleased to have someone attribute their fic to her. She's a bit particular like that, and with good reason.
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