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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:54 CDT
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you are an awesome writer! i love this story! did you ever finish "drug lords and angels"? i read that story a while ago and then it just kinda stopped. anyways, update soon! kikyou that bitch...grrrrr....
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:24 CDT
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Aww now why would you leave it there?!?! That's SO no fair *pouts*. Well I'm glad everything is getting explained cuz I'm as confused as a pig in clean water. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 21, 2004 14:32 CDT
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ok, ive been trying to read these chapters for the past like 2 days and my stupid family kept interrupting. But now that I'm finally reviewing...KIKYO IS SUCH A CLAY-POT-WHORE!!!! AHH!!!! How could she get there?!?! Why is she so stupid?! And she kissed Inuyasha with Kagome RIGHT THERE?!?! OOoooooo I can't wait till the "surprise" between KAgome and Kikyo, I hope it;s a fight. Cuz that would rule....even tho it would crush Souta. Oh will this drama ever end?!?!.......i kinda hope not cuz then the story would be over and i'd cry.
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Title: The Space Time Continuum
Reviewed By: lovingiris On: May 17, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,this is good.i like,i can;t wait to read what happens next.so update soon.
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Reviewed By: Band InuNerd89 On: May 14, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so far i was only thinking about the fact that kag and yash are mates so shouldn't they be living together.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:48 CDT
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*smacks self in forehead* I forgot my own email address..... it's duo_no_tsuin@yahoo.com ... *heh* (forgot the "n") I MUST needs sleep... either that or another headache is kicking in... ;)
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Title: up to chapter 14
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (rarely logged in anymore) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you have to end the chapter THERE!??! Urg... (For anyone that hasn't read the story yet... read it! I spoil stuff in reviews) *heh* Figures. Everything eventually leads back to Kikyo the bitcho! (Sorry Kikyo sympathizers, of which I usually am) I fricken hate her. In your story, she is beYOND evil!! (I think I made the evil girlfriend connection right before Kagome met her) The real story is, how did she get into the future with her vandetta intact? She disappears into Hell (I thought it was on of her Hell portals) which could mean that she made a pact with the devil to create that whole "curse." Then again... never underestimate the power of evil. *grins* I just started reading this story tonight... well, lastnight. It's tomorrow now. I just couldn't stop reading! (which is RARE for me) Honestly, from your story summary I had NO idea what it was about. I think it might boost your hits/reviews if you update it. (I guess it was for the "one-shot" which this clearly is not, now:) I thought of one, earlier, but I don't think you'd want one written by me. -_- I suck at writing summaries. :P I haven't been reading many Inu/Kag stories lately. I think I just got sick of his attitude in the series. So, I've been reading Sess/Kag. (As well as working on a couple myself) But your story renewed my like of Inu. And I'm VERY pleased that you did such justice for Sess!! ^_^ *sniffles* But when I read about Crystal-Lyn(?) my heart broke!! :( Sess needs happiness too, dammit! Erm, anyway.. OH about the hair cutting thing... (he shaved his head?? EWWWWWWW I need hair!) some cultures believe that your hair, since it continues to grow as time passes, holds all of your emotional baggage-- basically. So, yes, when a person's heart is broken if they cut their hair... it is symbolic of letting those old feelings go. (Honestly, I learned of this from Lenny Kravitz's Behind the Music on VH1 years ago. His ex-wife cut off all his dredlocks for him to be able to move on-- musically, and without the burden of their breakup. I think they even became friends) ANYway... I've been having an urge to cut my hair (I think it's about waist lenght right now) to just longer than shoulder length. I keep telling myself it's for my new 21 license, which I need to hurry up and get, but I think it's because I've had some... issues, lately. I'm in the middle of a fight with my three year boyfriend and plus... I'm still feeling guilty because I started having feelings for a guy at work. I still do, but tomorrow's my last day working there. (He's only 18! One of the MANY reasons why it's just WRONG!) After reading Alice 19th (a manga by Yu Watase, author of Fushigi Yugi and Ceres:Celestial Legend), I started thinking that I NEED to make amends with that guy tomorrow and am trying to find the right words. (Guess that explains what I'm doing up so late) Uhhhh... did I have a point to all this before I went on this tirade?? Great fic!! ^_^ *lol* Loved the whole skirt thing (guys love short skirts, them hentais;) and the lemon was sweet, descriptive, and satisying. But I always want more. ^.~ I love this fic! I'm SO glad that I didn't stop at just reading the summary. I wanted to know more. ('cause I think the effects of Kagome being in the past are NOT addressed enough in the series, yet) Kagome losing her memory wasn't just painful for her... it's painful for your readers too! Ow, that smarts... I had headaches up until it flooded back. ANYway, I'd better stop before I type anymore nonsense. Write more on this story because now you have TWO readers!!! ^_^ (ps, if mm.org doesn't tell me when you update.. could you send an email to duo_no_tsui@yahoo.com telling me that you updated?? I might take awhile to review... but I will! :)
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:13 CDT
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p.s. being the fabulous reviewer that I am, I emailed you a list if stories I'm reading. Well atleast some of them...even tho there were a lot. Did you get them?
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:43 CDT
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Doublet Gah!! ok well you cant really see the doubleness cuz my first revirew didnt really show up, thats why i have a couple nice little blanks. The coles notes versaion "yay! everyone getting along!". Now with this chapter holy shit Anubis-chan!! What are you thinking!! I thought it was going to have like 5 heart attacks just reading this monster. First a possibly Kikyo, then more possible Kikyo, then Inuyasha being "out" and being back "later" Whats going one?!>!? *cries Anime style reval of Sailor Moon*
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Title: .....title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:29 CDT
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:28 CDT
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Title: stupid title box
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 18:49 CDT
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Ok, we've established I'm a stalker *shrinks and cries in the corner* But I'm a good stalker!! I make my bed every morning and review every time I read. I'll email you the stories I'm reading now, or atleast ones I have on my favourtie's lists. Theres a lot lol. Aww I loved the chapters. I'm so happy Kagome remembers everything!! Those two are so cute in this story, theres little angst (tho good in small doses, to much makes me cry)and they're SO sweet to each other ^__^. The lemon was super cute. Introducing Kikyo again is genious, even tho shes a stupid clay pot and I hope she dies, but yay! new plot! not that I donyt love this one....ahhh I'm confused!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 04, 2004 20:43 CDT
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aww I love your stories. I retract my former statement. I'm more than content with any way you so chose to update lol. I love how they're falling for eachother again...Or atleast that she's falling for him again. *cocks an eyebrow* Kikyo huh? She's better now pop her slutty clay pot hair in anywhere or i'll cry....I feel very awckward being the only reviewer here.....*cries*
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 15:46 CDT
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bah! How can you update sooo much in one day and then not have more?!! *cries hysterically* its so sweet but kinda stalker like how hes watching her. I want her to remember!!! *cries again* please please PLEASE update soon
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 22:43 CDT
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yay, another story from you!!! I still re-read "Drug Lords and Angels" sometimese becuase it was so good. I'm really glad you're still writing!!
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