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| "The Space Time Continuum" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was amazing. I admire your writing. Nice job, i love it!
| Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 18, 2004 22:38 CDT
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*cries anime style* no! it can't be over!!! I cried in this chapter, when Inu went to hell? And when Kagome kept trying to make the illusion of Big Inuyasha go away? Oh man. Anubis-chan, this was such a great story, it definitly rivals that of Drug Lords.....but I dont knoq if it quite beats it lol.
| Reviewed By: Raven Black On: June 18, 2004 15:05 CDT
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this chapter rocks. it mad me cry. but i told myself you are not that evil, but i cryed anyway. don't scare the shit out of me ever again. thank you and have a nice day.
| Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 16:22 CDT
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holy shit! shippou just kinda popped up outta nowhere! it's like "hey! shippo is in bed playing around with his girlfriend!" whoa! lol, anyways, interesting chapter. a bit confusing, but it was good. you could have dragged out the whole scene between kikyou (Caryn) and souta longer. it was really abrupt and a bit out of place. well, congrats on being 17! happy belated b-day! my b-day is on june 14th (in 6 days!) and i'll be 18!!!!! oh yea! i can buy porn, cigarettes, and stuff from infomercials!!!!! indeed...can't wait for you to update!
| Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 05, 2004 22:59 CDT
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Ahh! That was such a great chapter. I didnt get the flashkback thing until the A/N. God Kikyo is a whore, like really, he was just using Souta like that? How rude! I so love Inu Yasha and Kagome, they remind me of my boyfriend and I. He just got back from school yay! Happy late birthday!! I can't wait for the next update!
| Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 22:25 CDT
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If i had've read this before I would have wished you good luck, but I didnt...But lets pretend I did. Ohmigod that was a whopper of an ending!! How could something like that just come up? Eep! When he said it was "just a gift" i thought Kikyo but then I thought Sessho woul be to smart for that...guess not.
| Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:54 CDT
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you are an awesome writer! i love this story! did you ever finish "drug lords and angels"? i read that story a while ago and then it just kinda stopped. anyways, update soon! kikyou that bitch...grrrrr....
| Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:24 CDT
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Aww now why would you leave it there?!?! That's SO no fair *pouts*. Well I'm glad everything is getting explained cuz I'm as confused as a pig in clean water. I hope you can update soon.
| Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 21, 2004 14:32 CDT
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ok, ive been trying to read these chapters for the past like 2 days and my stupid family kept interrupting. But now that I'm finally reviewing...KIKYO IS SUCH A CLAY-POT-WHORE!!!! AHH!!!! How could she get there?!?! Why is she so stupid?! And she kissed Inuyasha with Kagome RIGHT THERE?!?! OOoooooo I can't wait till the "surprise" between KAgome and Kikyo, I hope it;s a fight. Cuz that would rule....even tho it would crush Souta. Oh will this drama ever end?!?!.......i kinda hope not cuz then the story would be over and i'd cry.
| Title: The Space Time Continuum
Reviewed By: lovingiris On: May 17, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,this is good.i like,i can;t wait to read what happens next.so update soon.
| Reviewed By: Band InuNerd89 On: May 14, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so far i was only thinking about the fact that kag and yash are mates so shouldn't they be living together.
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:48 CDT
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*smacks self in forehead* I forgot my own email address..... it's duo_no_tsuin@yahoo.com ... *heh* (forgot the "n") I MUST needs sleep... either that or another headache is kicking in... ;)
| Title: up to chapter 14
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (rarely logged in anymore) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you have to end the chapter THERE!??! Urg... (For anyone that hasn't read the story yet... read it! I spoil stuff in reviews) *heh* Figures. Everything eventually leads back to Kikyo the bitcho! (Sorry Kikyo sympathizers, of which I usually am) I fricken hate her. In your story, she is beYOND evil!! (I think I made the evil girlfriend connection right before Kagome met her) The real story is, how did she get into the future with her vandetta intact? She disappears into Hell (I thought it was on of her Hell portals) which could mean that she made a pact with the devil to create that whole "curse." Then again... never underestimate the power of evil. *grins* I just started reading this story tonight... well, lastnight. It's tomorrow now. I just couldn't stop reading! (which is RARE for me) Honestly, from your story summary I had NO idea what it was about. I think it might boost your hits/reviews if you update it. (I guess it was for the "one-shot" which this clearly is not, now:) I thought of one, earlier, but I don't think you'd want one written by me. -_- I suck at writing summaries. :P I haven't been reading many Inu/Kag stories lately. I think I just got sick of his attitude in the series. So, I've been reading Sess/Kag. (As well as working on a couple myself) But your story renewed my like of Inu. And I'm VERY pleased that you did such justice for Sess!! ^_^ *sniffles* But when I read about Crystal-Lyn(?) my heart broke!! :( Sess needs happiness too, dammit! Erm, anyway.. OH about the hair cutting thing... (he shaved his head?? EWWWWWWW I need hair!) some cultures believe that your hair, since it continues to grow as time passes, holds all of your emotional baggage-- basically. So, yes, when a person's heart is broken if they cut their hair... it is symbolic of letting those old feelings go. (Honestly, I learned of this from Lenny Kravitz's Behind the Music on VH1 years ago. His ex-wife cut off all his dredlocks for him to be able to move on-- musically, and without the burden of their breakup. I think they even became friends) ANYway... I've been having an urge to cut my hair (I think it's about waist lenght right now) to just longer than shoulder length. I keep telling myself it's for my new 21 license, which I need to hurry up and get, but I think it's because I've had some... issues, lately. I'm in the middle of a fight with my three year boyfriend and plus... I'm still feeling guilty because I started having feelings for a guy at work. I still do, but tomorrow's my last day working there. (He's only 18! One of the MANY reasons why it's just WRONG!) After reading Alice 19th (a manga by Yu Watase, author of Fushigi Yugi and Ceres:Celestial Legend), I started thinking that I NEED to make amends with that guy tomorrow and am trying to find the right words. (Guess that explains what I'm doing up so late) Uhhhh... did I have a point to all this before I went on this tirade?? Great fic!! ^_^ *lol* Loved the whole skirt thing (guys love short skirts, them hentais;) and the lemon was sweet, descriptive, and satisying. But I always want more. ^.~ I love this fic! I'm SO glad that I didn't stop at just reading the summary. I wanted to know more. ('cause I think the effects of Kagome being in the past are NOT addressed enough in the series, yet) Kagome losing her memory wasn't just painful for her... it's painful for your readers too! Ow, that smarts... I had headaches up until it flooded back. ANYway, I'd better stop before I type anymore nonsense. Write more on this story because now you have TWO readers!!! ^_^ (ps, if mm.org doesn't tell me when you update.. could you send an email to duo_no_tsui@yahoo.com telling me that you updated?? I might take awhile to review... but I will! :)
| Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:13 CDT
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p.s. being the fabulous reviewer that I am, I emailed you a list if stories I'm reading. Well atleast some of them...even tho there were a lot. Did you get them?
| Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:43 CDT
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Doublet Gah!! ok well you cant really see the doubleness cuz my first revirew didnt really show up, thats why i have a couple nice little blanks. The coles notes versaion "yay! everyone getting along!". Now with this chapter holy shit Anubis-chan!! What are you thinking!! I thought it was going to have like 5 heart attacks just reading this monster. First a possibly Kikyo, then more possible Kikyo, then Inuyasha being "out" and being back "later" Whats going one?!>!? *cries Anime style reval of Sailor Moon*
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