| "Learning to Breathe" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Writer of Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the start of it. It was touching, but are you going to update soon?
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 07, 2004 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good beginning. Can't wait for more. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!! IT'S SO SAD!BUT I WANT TO READ MOREEEEE!LPEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinalee On: April 07, 2004 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job. I hope you update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ummm.. lil ol' me! On: April 06, 2004 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon. you caught my intrest. believe me thats a rare thing.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this sounds really interesting! I can't wait to read more! Although, I do feel bad for the others, Shippou especially. But I guess they had to be gone to serve the purposes of the story. Update soon!!!!! ^____^
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