| "The Nightwing: Robin Evolved" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I would like to start off by saying that the enjoyment factor is five simply because there are only two chapters up. You need to update man; overall the story has potential. As far as style goes, Bruce is painted out to be a total jerk and Raven seems to he a sex hound. You need to remember that even though you are writing an original fiction the characters need to be the same characters. If you change who they are then you should at least chronicle how they got to that point in their personalities. Another thing, you should re-read your chapters. Their are several minor mistakes like forgetting to end a quotation. If you make sure to re-read everything at least once then you should be able to conquer that problem. Other then those problems it seemed to be really good. I would like to see some more chapters though. I would really appretiate if you would give me a review, specifically concentrating on the creativity of the story. Your fic is very creative and I would very much like your opinion on that aspect of my writing. I look forward to seeing your comments.
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Reviewed By: Skullknightx01x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting take on how Dick Grayson moves out of the image of Robin and makes a new name for himself as Nightwing. An update is needed, you can elaborate on the the back story as to why Dick left Bruce. And why they don't see eye to eye.
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Please update very soon! This is a great story!
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