| "An unlikely adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: It is soooo good
Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is JPatt Aurthor of Danicing in the Darkness. Sorry it took me so long to get down here and read your fic. Well anyways I love it alot, you are an awsome writer and you have some really great ideas. Me though wow i am all out, but once I get past this lil block i have than I have this way cool idea. Sorry I am a little off track. I love the fic update soon but I got to jet ~Amy~
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 15:49 EDT
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I loved the new chapter it was really great. Do the stars mean kurama was talking to someone in his head. if it does then who was he talking to yoko or hiei? Koga must have some important part in the story if hes still in it. Please update soon can't wait to find out what happens next. Buh-Bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:34 EDT
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 23:46 EDT
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Those two chapters of your story were great i loved them. Though i was kinda wondering what sessy thought on the whole situation and what happened to kouga. Please update. Buh-Bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 09:22 EDT
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i swear I have to enter a reveiw to see my new reveiws...
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Title: Yo!!!
Reviewed By: Ceres no Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 16:44 EDT
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Pleaz update more!!!I'll make you!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 19:50 EDT
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do I HAVE TO WRITE A REVEIW TO SEE MY NEW REVEIWS!!! IT'S PISSING ME OFF!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 19:50 EDT
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do I HAVE TO WRITE A REVEIW TO SEE MY NEW REVEIWS!!! IT'S PISSING ME OFF!
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Title: loved it !!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it is so good. I love the oc's and this Angelic Layers sounds really cool i wish that was real id have that in a second. Guessing from your other reviews angelic layers is a real show but i have no clue what it is but i still understand the story. I will have to check out that show or game which ever it is. i don't relly like the dialouge thing but i guess its okay for the telephone. How could you even think of making Kouga evil? He is one of my favorite characters and i hate when people call him evil hes just misunderstood. Wait or is it as soon as they take the jewel shards from him he will go back to normal if thats the case ignore my earlier rambling. oh oh who does she end up with anybody or did you already say that and i forgot. okay enough of my talk Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: angelypoo (hehe, I'm not signed in right now ) On: April 25, 2004 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I hope you update soon! I like the direction this story is heading so far! I love both animes and I'm glad to read a story were they both mix! This is great!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:06 EDT
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Title: Yo~
Reviewed By: elementalspirit125 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 07:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, coolio story! Am luving the original characters, keep writng! Just saying hey, updated Yume no Naka and decided to tell you/read your story! Please write more, I like Angelic Layer/Inuyasha x-overs!!!!
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Reviewed By: berryberry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 01:06 EDT
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..finally got time to read the updated parts, and boy was it good! ^.^ YAY!inu yasha's finally in the story!! yay!!!! ^.^ =) =D can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Kumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exellante dude!!!!!!!!!{coughs and does surfer dude accent}Dude thus story is most triumphant ha ha{swings head around pointlessly}Like dude!!!!!!! Totally write more ha ha ha . Carebear
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Title: An Unlikely Adventure
Reviewed By: sakuraali On: April 09, 2004 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though i haven't read Angelic Layer yet, i still understood what the story was about. however, no offense or anything, but can u please try not to write dialouge and then what happens next? it's kinda long and hard to follow. PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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