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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, the bonus chapter threw me off, update soon please. I like it so much. You can still put things in 1st person, I've got two up and there's no problem, you just can't do CYOA's anymore, that's all. Check the rules more carefully. I hope you update soon. This is the first AL, Inu, YYH xover I've read, so you get to be a first for reading that type.
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Reviewed By: down2earth On: September 03, 2004 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright I just read the whole story (what has been posted so far) And it's pretty good. There 's a lot of action in it which is what I like...and uh that's it...
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Title: It was sooo cool!
Reviewed By: MsShadow554 On: September 03, 2004 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is getting so great! So suspensful! Who is the killer???I NEED TO KNOW!!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 00:36 CDT
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Hello all my devoted fans!!!!!!!!!!! This is DemonAngel writing you from the valley of the sun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways! It's getting really boring here and I'M DYING OF BOREDOM!!!! I LOVE ALL OF YOU MY DEVOTED FANS!!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:21 CDT
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HAHAHHAAAAA!!!!!!! I WROTE TO MYSELF!!! HOW HILARIOUS!!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:20 CDT
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I likie this story a lot. You should keep writing I think it's great.
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Reviewed By: FoxFirewoman On: June 08, 2004 16:29 CDT
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Hi. I really really like this story. I don't know exactly what Angelic Layer is but I'm interested in the story. I get what Angelic Layer is a little. Update!
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Reviewed By: MsShadow554 On: June 08, 2004 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story I like it a lot. The suspense is really killing though. I would like to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Katanagirl9791 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! WHOO HOO!! I loved the new chappy! It's gettin really good! Oh no! Kikyo's the person who created Wakaijosei??? Well...I kinda expected it but WHAT A SURPRISE!!PLEASE UPDATE!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 02:13 CDT
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You updated thats great. The chapter was really good i liked it alot. The end was kinda sad. They hurt my baby kouga they shall feel the wrath of my evil kouga plushie that shall claw thme to death aong with the that evil cliffie. die cliffie. okay im done now. I hope kagome and inu will be okay. please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Yay that was a great chapter i really liked that chapter alot. oh no the two gangs are wary of each other only bad things can come of that. okami just has to be demon but i don't know if hes anyone in particular. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: Soooo coool!!
Reviewed By: Katanagirl9791 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! You are a great writer! I wish I could create stories like you do! I thik that Raimei will fall in love with either Kurama or Okami. Which one? Update soooon!!!--*Chelsea
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 17:27 CDT
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:21 CDT
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I loved that chapter it was really grea i loved it. oh and thanks for answering my questions. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
yah yah yah....
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