| "The Cid Highwind Show" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: Replying to your review.
Reviewed By: HieiTheBest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I'm commenting on the comment you left me. I could not have copied you because I made my story back in August. You made yours in February. Plus, my style of the show is much different than yours. Don't go accusing me of something I didn't do >> Anyhoo, your story was pretty good. Jerry Springer-like, but good.
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Reviewed By: loveulesser On: August 03, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like I,Robot.....your story's good...but i need gore!!! make there be gore!!! it's good humor for those morbid people such as myself
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:20 CDT
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I mean I'm sorry about it, it will never happen again ^_^; sometimes I type to fast for my own good but anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shrina is just to cute and why is Cid so easily aggravated. Anyway update and don't worry you'll get a special thanks in my next chapter. ^_^; sorry I forgot about you won't happen again.
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Reviewed By: Alero On: June 03, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I loved this fic. I was so amused when I read it......I liked the second episode. MAjorly funny. Whoop-eeeeeeeee! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Little Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 20:19 CDT
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WTF??? Vincent doin commercials.. i've seen it all.... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 20:50 CDT
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gggggrrrrrrrrrr
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Reviewed By: lettheworldgo On: April 27, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::glomps Sephy-kun:: MINE!!!! ...Cid is cool....I wanna own a talk show now...maybe Sephiroth-sama will come onto it. XD YES!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 20:28 CDT
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i never receved Amy`s email
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Title: Well, I've Got 20/100 Vision So Sue Me ^_~
Reviewed By: sephlier(not logged in...at least I don't think so) On: April 23, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been offering reviews quite a bit here lately...this isn't really like me...anyway. There are still some spelling mistakes. What writing programs are you using? Spell check can find these rather easily...with the exception of homonyms (words that sound alike but have different meanings). You, I'm sure, will find this quite a bit in my stories...that why the revisions take forever. -_-, I like this latest chapter. The commercial was a little out of character for Mr. Valentine but he will be appearing in one...or maybe all of the latest Kingdom Hearts games (Nintendo's Game Boy Advance and Playstation 2...or X...they Square Enix hasn't really put forth too much of and opening just yet, not that I have seen). Vincent also will be in the DVD Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children that I have mentioned before (gawd he looks hawt *fangirl screams*) It was almost inevitable that a writer would have Mr. Wallace and Mr. Highwind square of in a profanity war ^_^. The old "pot calling the kettle black." It reminded me of a few Cid and Vincent doujinshi...sadly they didn't have to much of Barrett. This brightened up my day quite a bit...despite tornado warnings that have just popped up. I also noticed that if you are running a spell check, it missed words that look similar...or at least close (words that have similar letters). I think in one case you meant "pop" but somehow "poop" was substituted. Spell check WILL miss things like that. Hey, in the story summary for this fic I think you mean "incident" not "incodent." I do have AIM, now so as of this review I am online (screen name: sephlier) if you have any questions. I'm sorry but since I looked back at one of your reviews I noticed that your dialogue is running together again...it's not really all that bad but I just wanted to point it out to you. ~sephlier
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 09:35 CDT
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i understand,but my Comp is busted!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 09:36 CDT
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U guys arent writing reviews here.....wahhhh
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Title: Ah, Tidus and Rikku
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm...I LOVE your first chapter ^_^ This makes me wonder...so, in Final Fantasy X who did you choose to have Tidus flirt with in Guadosalam *no time to check for spelling*...too, sorry for the mini-spoiler (to those who haven't played Final Fantasy X or made it to that particular place just yet) either one of them is great when you are on your way to the temple to gain Shiva and defeat Anima and Seymour. The ratings above are based on each chapter here not just the one mentioned above. Your second chapter, not meaning to be harsh, went a little stale. Your third chapter was actually kind of cute! I remember the wedding scenes in Conde Petite (please as far as spelling goes here I have not had the time to play Final Fantasy IX again...the game guide was useless and there have been two (actually four now) Final Fantasy games that have distracted me from playing it a second time). I will never forget Vivi and Qina standing on the suspended boat...as well as Viv's feelings on the event. Despite my "8" ratings, I do like this story. Oh, for Cid...I know you're young though *no offense* don't worry about your choice of "cussing"...I don't know how to say this exactly...words always seem to fail me...have Cid be a little more in your face and pushy (though, for Kingdom Hearts...what I have played of it...he did seem a little off...guess that's what happens when it's an alternate reality...)
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Title: N/A
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 12:51 CDT
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If your wanderin about that cheese thing I`ll inform u that was a joke from my freind josh.He`s a new member,ShadowXL is his member name.Love ya......and continue the reviews.
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Title: babaloo
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 12:48 CDT
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i m speaking 4 my freind,Josh,YAH!
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Title: khxy
Reviewed By: yuyf On: April 20, 2004 10:43 CDT
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hi tommy!I like cheese yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 17:38 CDT
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o my god..... it took me a while to make chapter 2 and 3 and they`re wicked short!im sorry my newer chapters will be longer.
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Title: Hewwo
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi myself.
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Title: First Review
Reviewed By: Chibi Sephy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tikku forever! ^_^;; Well, actually I despise both Rikku and Yuna, so it doesn't matter really... o_O
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Title: Are You Hiding This?
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:23 CDT
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Hey, it's sephlier again (yeah, I know I logged in) I saw this yesterday and was wondering why it said there were no available chapters... I'm anxious to read it when you feel like uploading them...or showing them.
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