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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story so far. U haven't updated in a long time and I was just wondering if you were going to continue the story. If so I hope u let me know.
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Title: Interesting, but...
Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
A bit of a broken prose in this one (IE the words don't flow into each other), and there's quite a few spelling mistakes, but the theme is a good one, albeit one that has been done before. I'd suggest proofreading/spellchecking your fics before posting, especially to check for skipped words (there were a few in both chapters, I think). Keep writing, you've got some interesting ideas. Th3 R3@n!m@t3d RynØr
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Title: R U Ever
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I took notice to the last time you updated! R u ever going to? PLEASE DO I enjoyed it verrrrry much! So did my friends~^_^~
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Title: Updata please
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great beginning, but now I'm sorry to say that I'm getting impatient... so PLEASE UPDATE! ...soon if it's not too much trouble... ^_^;
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
you start off good then you don't finish how mean please update
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Reviewed By: blackrose15 On: June 17, 2004 21:09 CDT
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*sigh* gotta love the smirk, wonderful storie ^_^ but you haven't updated... UPDATE!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!! my minions will track you down *glares*
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Reviewed By: sango_demon_exterminator [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Omg I forgot I had this story 0.o god im stupid I'll try to update asap!
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Reviewed By: Kagomeangel13 On: May 04, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please you got to update soon before I lose my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i really lyke this story...i cant wait to see wuts gonna happen next...
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: April 09, 2004 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! The first two chapters of your story are amazing! I'm definitly gonna continue your story so you better update, update and UPDATE! Ja Ne ^_^
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Title: fdhdfhfh
Reviewed By: chzzxgf On: April 09, 2004 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
please just hurry up ,I CAN'T WAITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess(not logged on) On: April 08, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! cool! i am adding you to my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Grrr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love ur story so far & i can totaly relate to kagome & her mom (unfortunately) so i must say UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! plz update soooonn!! *puppydog eyes* ^.^
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Reviewed By: inus gal On: April 08, 2004 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update! update! update! this story is asome please update it soon! i really want to find out what happens with Inu and Kag!^_^
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 07, 2004 22:29 CDT
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he may think he is in love at first sight but that doesn't mean she is going to fall at his feet because of his sexy grin! *sighs dreamily* man i love that grin....i can't wait until your next chapter!
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