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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was incredible! The detail that you put into the whole scene and their thoughts was just impeccable! You nailed their characters (pardon the pun) and I could completely believe it was Kagome and Inuyasha. I applaud your wonderful work, and I don't see anything I would change. I think my favorite part was the last line; it showed you knew what your story was (even though it was PWP) and you kept to it. I'm impressed. It's not often that I read works in which I cannot find anything I would change. A sequel would be nice, though. *chuckles*
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Reviewed By: hrc On: April 24, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo i loved the story it was so awsome good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...soo kewl!!!...dont force yur muse tew change back any time soon!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 08:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sweet and sexy!! I like!!! I hope your muse doesn't transform back too soon if it makes you write like this.
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Title: yaayy
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i agree with esca! that was awesome. i loved your writing style, i hate it when people have a good idea, but write SO freaking vaguely! anywho, i loved it
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Reviewed By: EscaMorae On: April 07, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo that was a good one!!! i like youre writing style.
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