| "Kuro's Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:04 CDT
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I enjoyed this chapter, it bridges to the future I hope where the two can relate to each other as something other than Pet and Owner.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:38 CDT
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Ah it is nice to see Kuro putting the time to good use and wading through his quagmire. I fear the appearance of Bunnies in your chapter remarks.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:34 CDT
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I wonder how he'd like his dick run through a paper shredder, the way Kuro's tail was? Can't start with that though. Humans are so weak, he'd die of shock before he was properly punished." Oh my, thank the GodS for sweet Vegeta at his best!!! I cannot WAIT to see Vegeta find the perpetrator and get his revenge! Of course, I cannot wait EVEN MORE for Vegeta to cry and turn SSJ3 so that Kuro finally realizes Vegeta really and truly does love him! Aaaah! Anticipation, it kills!
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 12:11 CDT
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Ah the revenge plans, oh the beauty of feeding the bastard back the pain he's inflicted. Ooooo he should use the wish not only to bring them there but to make them feel the full depth of the pain they have inflicted. Vegeta's gruff care is very sweet and very much in keeping with his character. Thanks for the update. I'm afraid of what Muse has up his sleeve. And I hate that picture.
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Title: Chappie 5
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plyric *looks up at rating, glares, stares at ratings* They don't go higher than 10!!!! Vegeta told Kuro he loves him!!! Plyric's *heart pounding!!!* MORE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:44 CDT
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OKay I logged on but that doesn't stop stupidity. Please apply the above review to Scrap of Hope. So stupid **sigh**
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Ah I am logged in. I liked this chapter, so far I really like this story. It let the reader see more of Vegeta's dilemma without revealing it. I really hope that Goku manages to make Vegeta proud. I do love the juxaposition of Vegeta's stern, almost harsh treatment of Goku and his growing desparate need for Goku to rescue him from some fate he would rather not suffer. Loved the kiss too, Goku is very sexy and being so oblivious to it makes him all the cuter.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 19:30 CDT
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I appreciate the very nicely detailed deaths of those trying to hurt Kuro. Personally I think Vegeta needs to find the sick bastard in charge of this merry band of torturors and make him an Artistic Message to those others who find their jollies this way. Kuro has been driven primal but at least Vegeta understands that, hopefully he will be able to break through soon. Glad Muse is doing better but still he deserved it. Loved the way Vegeta put to good use all the horror he was taught so young. He can be so well the Worsest thing that ever happened to someone.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 19:11 CDT
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Hmmm nice chase. Going to take a few chases and getting caught before Kuro stops running. I like the way you write the sex. I never feel slighted. Yes the bad guys died, died screaming and I was much pleased. I hope there will be the song Vegeta was practicing in the mating, I'm hoibble I know but I really would like to read Vegeta singing for Kuro.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE Unforgivable back on FF.net and I love this story too! I really hope you include your own version of a Saiyajin mating ritual! Also, tons of applaude to Vegeta blasting those horrible freaks to the next dimension, along with those d**m chi-binders! =)
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 16:31 CDT
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I'm glad Vegeta finally realized his mistake in leaving those vile beasts alive and killed them. I was quite pleased you killed them and they died screaming, bleeding and with decent levels of pain. So will Vegeta sing the betrothal song again? And maybe cook the dinner again? Not that Kuro will ask that of him cause there is no one he would rather belong too than Vegeta, but it would be a good step in having Kuro realize his value as a person, not just his value to Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: gokumum On: April 08, 2004 14:46 CDT
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Nice side story, hopefully you will also write their mating. I always love the mating scenes!
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