| "Teasing Games" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~firekitsune~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww all the embarassment ^_^ I love it. This story just rox my sox! Twister huh? That will be interesting ^^. Can't wait for the next chapter, so continue soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:57 CDT
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Yay, an update!!! The strip pool game was very yummy, I love the distractions. ^-^ OOOh, Twister? Is the spinner rigged? That's gonna be soooo much fun.^-^ Update soon please!!!
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Title: Cool! ^ ^
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 08, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always awesome! I can't wait for the next chappie......wish I had some constructive critsisim.....but it's too damn good! Update!
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Reviewed By: The Unknown666 On: May 26, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only seven minutes?! Why not fifteen.....I know you want constructive criticism, but if the fanfic is so good you can hardly think of any? ~Sigh~ Well the stripping thing should be...interesting to read since I don't think there's been a fanfic yet with it. Or at least not one I can think of....Anyways, please write more!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:08 CDT
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O.O Holy fuck, I think I've gone blind just from the thought of Jou and Yami in that closet... *gags violently* Please, never do that again in a story, that's too graphic for me.
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Title: my gosh
Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 15:31 CDT
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wow, you need to write more soon !!!
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Reviewed By: Nina Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 21:36 CDT
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how about to finish off the game, have kaiba and joey go back into the closet so that they could go further then they did the first time. :) great story by the way.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 12, 2004 19:57 CDT
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I think this may have to go to my favorites list. I love the pairings. Bakura is a fav. of mine. And the whole Seto/Jou thing is amazing. I hope to see more of this one soon.
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Title: the two yaoi girls in review mode
Reviewed By: Synthetic_Darkness and Yukiko_Angel On: May 12, 2004 19:25 CDT
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YK - Wow, I really like it ^^ And well, Jou seem really sexy I think ^^ SD : Better give more soon, you're my fav ~_^
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Title: NICE CHAPTER!!!
Reviewed By: Alpha Sierra On: May 11, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really coming along VERY nicely! I really liked the almost-hentai-but-not-quite scene with Jounouchi and Yami in the closet...it was really nicely done. The events leading UP to said almost-hentai scene (Jou's flirting) Was done very well too. I loved when Yami said (or thought) something like "Jou was becoming a woman" It was hilarious! The plot line is coming along REALLY well too, I can't wait for the "strip pool" scenes...that is gonna be great. *grins* I don't have anything to complain about in this chapter...it was really well written. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 16:06 CDT
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You shouldn't have made Yami tell Joey. It'd be a lot more fun if he didn't have a clue what was going on. But anyway, great job. I think the next chapter sounds fun...heh. ;) Keep it up. And update soon, too!
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Reviewed By: Firekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww great chapter!!! but I don't think that Yugi's plans will go so smothly from now on..heheheh This story is absolutly WONDERFUL!! You must update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: May 10, 2004 22:00 CDT
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Great fic! I think youre right...it did get a bit steamy there. Can't wait for the next chappie! And I REALLY can't wait until Jou and Seto get hooked up!! I'm gettin all antsy!!! >_
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: May 10, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Great fic! I think youre right...it did get a bit steamy there. Can't wait for the next chappie! And I REALLY can't wait until Jou and Seto get hooked up!! I'm gettin all antsy!!! >_
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 21:40 CDT
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A videocamera in the closet? *whines* I want it! Okay, sorry, enough of that. Yeah, definitely hot over here, and listening to Nellys "Hot in herre" really isn't helping. Jou, that was evil! Hot, but evil! ...I liked that. Now, is Yugi ging to get back at Yami? Hmmmm...update soon!
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