| "Love and Care in One Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz243 On: January 15, 2005 21:17 CST
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wow... i hate to sound rude but i do agree with the others. its. horrible. for one the chapters are short and the author notes dominate the entire chapter. for another your spelling is ok but not great.. (inflation?) and for yet another how is possible that kagome would allow a full demon inuyasha in modern japan (first chapter) ?!!... work on your spelling and if you dont have a long chapter (which is what some people may want as opposed to less then a page) then update when you have time.
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Title: CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 21:15 CST
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I agree with a few reviewers. If ya dont have the time then update in the orginal fashion. Anytime you can. If you took that insult to heart you shouldnt, DarknessLover16 is just giving a good helping of advice. Less notes, more story. DarknessLover16 did also say that she liked the plot and story. (AS DO I!)SoOoOo are ya going to continue? I surly hope so. I know the feeling of having somone shoot ya down here and there but thats jsut one person out of like a bunch! Much Love!
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Reviewed By: nekokitsune16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plesae please please plesae please dont stop the story its real good piece o advice -- dont listen to thoses who insult u for they have nothing better to do with thier time
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Title: no don't do it !
Reviewed By: kira the dark fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:37 CST
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no ya can't! oh well, but if ya do at least try and update your other story ok!?!?!?!?!?!? UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORY AND DON'T DELETE IT BECAUSE I CAN HELP YA WRITE IT OR YOU CAN GIVE IT TO ME AND I'LL CONTINUE IT! DON'T DELETE IT AND E-MAIL ME AT bree@beachbound.org TO TELL ME IF I CAN TAKE THIS STORY AND CONTINUE IT FOR YA!
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Title: Okay i'm gonna tell you straight
Reviewed By: Cheyenne(DarknessLover16) On: December 23, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to be cruel but your writing stinks. The plot from what i can gather is intresting but you write more notes in the story than it. PATHETIC! Either you get your head in gear and start writing more chapters or longer ones nobdies going to read them. I don't like being rude to you because i like your story so far and i want it to get better. So please do a better job. Thanks
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:36 CST
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very cute, but really if ya would you could combine chapters to make them longer. Having them a bit short is odd... but hey your story's good.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hilarious fic!!!!! not exactaly original, but hilarious!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alucard009 On: October 02, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy the plot u made up.. but the way ur writing isn't really my kinnd of taste in reading...but hey i'm not the boss of you.. so update so i can read some more.
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Reviewed By: someonesomewhere On: July 27, 2004 05:58 CDT
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Hi K005 here for some odd reson i have a silly idea =^_^= and it involves panckakes >> oops sorry wrong fic anyways maybe you should have Hiei Kurama Yusuke Kuwabaka and Kagome have breakfast together and maybe we should introduce a certain demon (coughhieicough) to some panckakes with syrup (Note:Syrup makes you hyper)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you updated its me ann soooooooooooooooooooooooo plz update again i luv kag/kur i think inu-trashas a cheater i don't hate inu and kikuyo i jus don't like them oh well were all different
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Reviewed By: Anti Botan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 20:23 CDT
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I hate to say this so I going to put it in the mmost positive way possible. Here we go!! I HATE KAGOME AND KURAMA TOGETHER I WISH KIKYO WOULD KILL HER OR SOMETHING KAGOME IS A FUCKING SASSY BITCH!!!!!!!Remember this was the most positive way to say this!:)
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Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 18:19 CDT
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let us know when you write the other story and update soon
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: kegs_the_silver_kitsune On: April 24, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome please dont stop the story and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a pretty good story! i hope that u continue soon! much love never forget the love! update soon!
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