| "Love and Care in One Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
listen dont listen to what others say i never do well in this case wrote the persons an idot keep on writing if you need more to help you just say so in your next chapter and ill type more ho and i hpoe ypur feling better from your sickness moms calling and buy the sounds of it she isent happy but then when is a 9month pregnant woman ever happy bye bye key key
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you aren't righting this story anymore but I do like it . Pluse don't let anyone discurage you from writing if you enjoy what you are doing nothing else matters at least in my opinion.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 22:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't stop writing this when it getting really good... Please update this story of your soon please. I'll be very happy if you do, I'll also be looking forward to reading the next fic.
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz243 On: January 15, 2005 21:17 CST
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wow... i hate to sound rude but i do agree with the others. its. horrible. for one the chapters are short and the author notes dominate the entire chapter. for another your spelling is ok but not great.. (inflation?) and for yet another how is possible that kagome would allow a full demon inuyasha in modern japan (first chapter) ?!!... work on your spelling and if you dont have a long chapter (which is what some people may want as opposed to less then a page) then update when you have time.
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Title: CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 21:15 CST
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I agree with a few reviewers. If ya dont have the time then update in the orginal fashion. Anytime you can. If you took that insult to heart you shouldnt, DarknessLover16 is just giving a good helping of advice. Less notes, more story. DarknessLover16 did also say that she liked the plot and story. (AS DO I!)SoOoOo are ya going to continue? I surly hope so. I know the feeling of having somone shoot ya down here and there but thats jsut one person out of like a bunch! Much Love!
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Reviewed By: nekokitsune16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plesae please please plesae please dont stop the story its real good piece o advice -- dont listen to thoses who insult u for they have nothing better to do with thier time
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