| "Love and Care in One Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: no don't do it !
Reviewed By: kira the dark fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
no ya can't! oh well, but if ya do at least try and update your other story ok!?!?!?!?!?!? UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORY AND DON'T DELETE IT BECAUSE I CAN HELP YA WRITE IT OR YOU CAN GIVE IT TO ME AND I'LL CONTINUE IT! DON'T DELETE IT AND E-MAIL ME AT bree@beachbound.org TO TELL ME IF I CAN TAKE THIS STORY AND CONTINUE IT FOR YA!
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Title: Okay i'm gonna tell you straight
Reviewed By: Cheyenne(DarknessLover16) On: December 23, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to be cruel but your writing stinks. The plot from what i can gather is intresting but you write more notes in the story than it. PATHETIC! Either you get your head in gear and start writing more chapters or longer ones nobdies going to read them. I don't like being rude to you because i like your story so far and i want it to get better. So please do a better job. Thanks
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
very cute, but really if ya would you could combine chapters to make them longer. Having them a bit short is odd... but hey your story's good.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hilarious fic!!!!! not exactaly original, but hilarious!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alucard009 On: October 02, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy the plot u made up.. but the way ur writing isn't really my kinnd of taste in reading...but hey i'm not the boss of you.. so update so i can read some more.
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Reviewed By: someonesomewhere On: July 27, 2004 05:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi K005 here for some odd reson i have a silly idea =^_^= and it involves panckakes >> oops sorry wrong fic anyways maybe you should have Hiei Kurama Yusuke Kuwabaka and Kagome have breakfast together and maybe we should introduce a certain demon (coughhieicough) to some panckakes with syrup (Note:Syrup makes you hyper)
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