| "Pikachu in DBGT!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Fear_of_Real_Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i belive that you have a very good idea for a fanfic though your spelling really needs work. i wont coment on your grammer cuz mine isnt very good most of the time. your fanfic's style of writing is almost on par with Anne Mccaffrey's Pern books (if you havent already read them i truely recomened them)like where you decide where to end a chapter seems like a very well thought out place witch is very hard to find on most fanfic websites.
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Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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