| "Himitsu/Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. I really liked the 6th chapter. We all ponder what lies ahead, but to contemplate the past as a possible future just boggles the mind. Ne? Well, our doggie-boy probably has a lot to do with the answer. I know what I would choose.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(I'm never signed in...*rolls eyes*) On: November 18, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Aw!!!!/Kawaii!/Rin:Hai, hai!/I want more, please?
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Hakura0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow... Again I never really thought about the fact that it was basically Kagome's fault that Shippou's parents were dead. I'm glad to see that you reminded everyone that she is only 15. A nice take on Kagome's ever mysterious and unmentioned father as well.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Hakura0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... It's Kohaku isn't it? I'd never really thought about the possibility of that...
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Hakura0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hilarious. But who could not start thinking things after being around Miroku for so long, eh?
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Hakura0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
For some reason all this could make me think of was these 20 trees on my street that ALL get pink blossoms... It's a very pink street...
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Reviewed By: Hakura0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I really enjoyed this chapter, it was cute. Funny how Kagome makes such a big deal out of Inu-Yasha reading though, isn't it? (Though she probably would.)
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