| "The Book" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
dng it! that was funny!
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Title: Please Write A Sequel!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write a sequel, like for what Vegeta says to Goku at his house, and what will he do about it? What will Chi Chi do about it? Hmmm...
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: May 13, 2004 08:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
v gud this woz fune lol, plz write more oneshots like this!!!!!!!!! btw it would also b kool if ya could ck out r fics our pename is 'bimbo and ditz' if ya du ont fget ta review! :0) gtg coz at skool in bizness lol, bye byez SURFS UP!
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Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was chuckling at the end of this fic. I would've loved to see exactly HOW Vegeta planned to rub it in Goku's face, considering how clever and canny he is, but otherwise, I enjoyed myself nonetheless. Good story! =)
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