| "Dark Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: January 09, 2005 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was HOT!
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Title: To hot for T.V.
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness that was so hot i could almost melt. I have to read all of your stories now.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
**runs for a cold shower** I think I will be in here for a while, thanks for the fic. **closes the curtain and turing on the cold water full blast**
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Title: Koaitan Princess
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic. That ending kinda bugged me though. Oh well, nothing can be perfect. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *Notloggerdin* On: May 13, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWSI!! I LOVED THIS FIC DARK ANS SEXY LOL! YUMMY KEEP WRITTING U HAVE AN AVID READER AND FAN LOL LATER! LOVED THE LEMONS!
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Title: GREAT...
Reviewed By: Bigbrotherknives [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing: I gave you an eight because when you go into detail it's great having all those detailed parts but sometimes it gets so overwhelming. Spelling and Grammer: Very well thought out on the words you used. Orignality/Creativity: If this was added into the story of DBZ like lost episodes to dirty to be seen in the United States I think I would be obessed with DBZ. Enjoyment Factor: This story really kept me on my toes I wanted to just read more and more of what happens.
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Reviewed By: spini On: May 05, 2004 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know I´ve read it before, but still love it! It´s brilliant! And so damn sexy! lol
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Reviewed By: mona On: May 02, 2004 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!!!great chapter...i thought it the mysterous man was yamcha but i guess not...please update asap.
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: April 27, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great fic!
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 24, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo!!!!@_@ please update asap...that was just sexy...it doesn't even matter, she got caught.
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 20, 2004 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooh!!!! ok...very sexy...gosh...like wow...@_@love it...please update asap
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 18, 2004 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...another great chapter...god please update asap...^_^
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 14, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just got to review your work...its beautiful in it's own way...and again you keep me hanging in the end but it made the story good and it draw you, asking for more...please update asap...thank you... my friends read this story and they totally flip when it just keep them hanging in the end^_^ thank you for that
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 11, 2004 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please tell me theres going to be another chapter...you totally keep me hanging...please update this story asap...its not finish yet.please...please.
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Reviewed By: Meli On: April 10, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. This was the first story that I read that was written by you.
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