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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Girness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 21:34 CDT
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I love the story! You are such an awesome writer!
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this fic!
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Title: Aw
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 21:08 CST
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Your 3 year fic, it was probably the first thing you wrote? It is not only thick with sexual content but it also warms up the heart towards the end. I am one worshiper of all that is you and your writing prowess.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this story. I think I read this somewhere else but either let me give you two thumbs up.
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Title: Nice. ^_~
Reviewed By: Bura400 (not signed in) On: May 18, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have a feeling this is an earlier fanfiction, but it's still good. Barely any grammar errors and just too yummy in general. All in all, an enjoyable read. Bura
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I truly enjoyed this tantalizing tale. I gave you a 9 for Style of Writing because sometimes you got a little too flowery with your wording. It takes your attention away from the action in progress. I only found one recurring Spelling error...plumb instead of plump. But hey, even spellcheck can't catch them all. The Originality was given a 9. Why? Well, this theme is overdone. I will give you this though, this is by far one of my favorite versions of the those mysterious three years. As for my Enjoyment rating...this fic kicks major ass. I loved how you kept both in character even while tossing in a bit of mushiness. Beautifully done! I will have to read more of your wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: venus4902 On: March 09, 2005 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story reminded me of a book I read once called Jake and Mimi. The same swiching of POV and the mysterious stalker, not to mention a whole lot of sex. If you haven't read it, I think you would enjoy it. Anywho, I loved this story. I thought it had been abanddoned when I first read it months and months ago. I'm glad to see you finished it.
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: January 09, 2005 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was HOT!
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Title: To hot for T.V.
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness that was so hot i could almost melt. I have to read all of your stories now.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 17:02 CDT
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**runs for a cold shower** I think I will be in here for a while, thanks for the fic. **closes the curtain and turing on the cold water full blast**
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Title: Koaitan Princess
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic. That ending kinda bugged me though. Oh well, nothing can be perfect. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *Notloggerdin* On: May 13, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWSI!! I LOVED THIS FIC DARK ANS SEXY LOL! YUMMY KEEP WRITTING U HAVE AN AVID READER AND FAN LOL LATER! LOVED THE LEMONS!
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Title: GREAT...
Reviewed By: Bigbrotherknives [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing: I gave you an eight because when you go into detail it's great having all those detailed parts but sometimes it gets so overwhelming. Spelling and Grammer: Very well thought out on the words you used. Orignality/Creativity: If this was added into the story of DBZ like lost episodes to dirty to be seen in the United States I think I would be obessed with DBZ. Enjoyment Factor: This story really kept me on my toes I wanted to just read more and more of what happens.
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Reviewed By: spini On: May 05, 2004 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know I´ve read it before, but still love it! It´s brilliant! And so damn sexy! lol
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Reviewed By: mona On: May 02, 2004 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!!!great chapter...i thought it the mysterous man was yamcha but i guess not...please update asap.
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