| "Neko's Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SoloTalent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this ff is very good in my opinion . Although its rather short , i liked the style and the storys . Its fun to read , but I too wonder why on ff.net there are more chapter... I'm gonna read them now and give a review there too . Keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: siriusgurl2001 On: August 20, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally, of all the fanfics on ranma and akane, i think yours is one of the few that is well written as well as entertaining. i was happy that you went back and for in pov and kept the changes consistent enough so that your story flowed easily. you may want to watch how far you got back though, some of the opposing views are more or less implied in the renderings and by going back, you tend to get repetitive. btw, your lemon was fabulous. and you shouldn't give a flying damn what that jerk said about it. keep writing, i look forward to reading more of your material. sincerely, - spider three
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Reviewed By: Anthraxus the Decayed On: August 06, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why haven't you posted the last two chapters?
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
i just finnishd reading up to chapter 10 and i look forward to more in the future. you have wrighten very tastfuly in the lemon and other parts of this grouping of storis. please keep up the good work. Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Reviewed By: David A. Tatum [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... wow. Everything about this fic, from the nice, sweet moments to the hard lemon in chapter 10, reminds me of why I like Ranma fanfiction -- something which I haven't really sought out for over a year. I sincerely hope you'll be continuing this thing.
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