| "Yumi" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: yumi
Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. But there are too many characters to keep up with, and it gets anoying how you keep explaining what everyone looks like. but otherwise it's pretty good. please continue.
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon damnit!!!!!
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Title: BRIGHT?
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 08:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Araka: I AM TOO BRIGHT! *turns around and hits a metal pole she knew was there* X_x;; Seken: >.> I never....thought...she was in the beginning and I still don't. Araka: Shut up. >.< It's good so far, just bunches of characters, too many if you ask me. Well, JA!
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's interesting to me so far and it's hard ot keep my attention for more than two seconds
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
you miss spelled should
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Araka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey....I didn't say anything...*hugs Seken* He's a cutie. Ah, but remember, he is a half-demon. Hanyou, if you'd like. ^^ It was great, bunches of details. *sighs* *hits Lady Tokyo with the mallet of doom* MWAHAHHAHAHAHHA! *cough*
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story man good plot i enjoyed it and i don't ususally enjoy things less than R
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Reviewed By: madison johnson On: June 01, 2004 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
update plzzzz! im enjoying this.
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Title: O.o;;;
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, it seemed out of character that Hiei revealed his name so quickly but, hey, it's your story. Anywho, it's good. I like Red. *huggles Kurama* GO HIEI! >.> I should be the one to fall asleep in his arms....
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Title: Thanks & Nice Fic!!!
Reviewed By: Nika [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks, you are my first review, glad you liked the fic. Yours is good, I enjoyed it. Lots of suspence. Update soon! This is going int my favorites! ~Nika~
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Title: Good.
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ You should keep writing. 'Tis good. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked it but i was in a rush ... then i lost what was going on at the very end ... anyway, keep writing the story!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue. its good so far.
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