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| "Corrupted Thought" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: AnGi On: April 15, 2004 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well written as usual. I caught a few things though. Ch 1: "Like are in any position to talk." - you're missing the word "you" Ch. 2:His long, silky golden hair - should be silver, Inuyasha isn't blonde Other than that, please write more!! I will gladly revise if you need me to. Keep up the good work. AnGi ^_~
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: mira0683 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I have been reading Inuyasha fanfic's for a while now and I am glad to see that I can still come across a new storyline that has me excited for the next chapter! I loved how close you got them to kissing in the first chapter. Their attitudes totally remind me of the anime. Keep the chapters coming!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kristy On: April 12, 2004 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
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