| "Toxic Pleasures" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Siscobid On: April 02, 2005 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really sweet . Chapter 9 really touched me . I hope you either wright anouther chapter , or wright a seaqal . I really injoyed the entier fic. and look for more !
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Title: *Claps*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 11, 2005 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is (or was, as I do not know if the story has been all told yet) beautiful, lovely, poetic in ways that cannot be described. It is full, rich with emotion, your hallmarks, being true to the characters, and the situations they are in, shine brightly here. I have enjoyed this, will continue to enjoy this, if you so continue this. Though I must ask, did you ever watch/read Angel Sanctuary? I found a hint of its flavor at the end of chapter 9. All in all, this was masterful, well thought out and executed, but then your work is always stunning. I cannot say this enough, Bravo. P.S.: The formatting of chp. 8 & 9 were odd, no separate paragraphs. Just thought you might want to know.
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Title: Total awesomeness!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Katharine On: March 11, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Seto/Mokuba fanfic I've read yet! Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brazillia On: March 02, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic! It's very original and smoothly written. Usually I hate incest because it grosses me out naturally, but for some reason, I didn't feel spastic at all here. I love how everything is so detailed, etc. Please update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Velvetima_to lazy to log in On: March 02, 2005 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Awsome story. Please don't take so long untll your next update or I may burst lol!
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Reviewed By: Tapeka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. i can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yaoi_Anime_FanGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woop! Woop! ::huggles Mokie plushie:: me like me like!! Oh Yeah! Me like!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 05:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good Seto and Mokuba interaction. Looking forward to the next revendous.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate incest. Can't stand it. If I ever read it, it's always a rape fic. Saying that, I admit that I like, no completely adore, you story. The sex, the characterization( I don't know why, but I can picture Adult Mokuba that way), the club, everything!^-^ Please update soon.
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Title: Mreow!
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I like it. No, no... that's putting it mildly. I really like it. The sex is a bit short, but it's spicy and hot. I like the flow and click of the story, there are very few typos and *shrugs* I guess I just really like it. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you post it soon! *ecchi grin* It's rare that I read such a cliche so nicely done, you should put it into YWL's cliche contest *laughs* shameless plug: http://www.geocities.com/ywl_cc_again
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Reviewed By: Kurama-no-Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad i'm not the only person who like the brothers as a couple *nod* though I am somewhat displeased as to how Mokuba is acting toward Seto, aw but it's okay as long as it all turns out for the better in the end. Great work, not only the idea is good, so it your writing skills, i can't say as much for myself.
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Title: Toxic
Reviewed By: Anna Coleman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sick and twisted just like me. Keep updating, and I'll keep reading.
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Title: FWEEEEEEE
Reviewed By: KisaandherDuoplushie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 04:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
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Reviewed By: pink vamp2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was definatly unusual!i would never have dreamed of putting seto with someone other than jou!I'm glad u did though ^_^ hurry up and review! its gonna get better when seto/mokuba get togeather! nikki-chan
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 23:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story. Lots of potential. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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