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| "Ocarina of Time: An Alternate Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: X_X I think my brain is bleeding
Reviewed By: Kathrine Reverie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your writing styal, there were few grammer and spelling mistakes,,, this is the most orginal thing i've seen in a comedy,, but i really wish I hadn't read it. X_X; It was funny in a scary sort of way. The woodie the wood pecker and the wizard of oz thing are things that made me want to stab myself in the head. I do like how spontanious things were,, but things were a bit TOO out of character. I exspected a comedy, but this was more of a spontanious combustion of odd ideas. Whilst it's not a bad fic, i just didn't enjoy very much of it. not a bad consept though. I just, as previously stated, couldn't enjoy most of it. Then again that's just me. I think i'd like to see a serious fic by you, it's fit your writing styal a bit more in my oppinion. I think i'll check out your stories page to see if you have one that's serious, if you do then i'll most likley read it. Sorry if I sounded harsh, it's just my oppinnion
| Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job! Watch the credits after you defeat the game, though...trust me...
| Title: HILLARIOUS!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! It was extremely silly and you put the best parts of EVERY movie in there! I LOVE IT!
| Reviewed By: vashs_lil_jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 09:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
*is trying to get back in her seat* Good God that was fun. I seriously wouldn't thing of anything so good to put together to change the ending of anything even if i wanted to. O o;; But that was good!! Lovely and funny from the 'Peanut Butter Jelly' song to the very end. Heehee!! Good job!
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