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| "Hate" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: WEIRD
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a weird yet quite well written fic. I could really see Dee doing that with the Commissioner. If you have the ability to write something with believability that normally would be unbelievable, you have a talent. Keep up the good work. Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Alaskan Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be without a doubt, undeniable, absolutely, one of the best fics I have ever read in any kind of genre. I love the way you've written it from Dee's perspective. You have both men TOTALLY in character!! And personally I think that given half a chance Berk would definitely be all over Dee, I'm glad to see someone else agree's with me. You also have Dee's sarcasm and dry humor perfectly, and the witty banter that you've got between them during the whole fic could have come directly from the pages of the manga!! I also love how after it's all said and done you've got the perfect Berkley line "I won't tell Ryo, you won't tell the review board, and we'll both die happy." I damn near laughed my ass off at that one. This is now on my favorite story list and I am making anyone who will listen to me read this. And now wihout further adeu, "YOU FUCKING ROCK!!!!!!!" *ahemU* Looking forward to more.
| Title: Hot damn ^___^
Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 10:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was absolutely fucking brilliant ^_^ You pulled off the BerkxDee better than I ever thought possible. I even felt kinda bad for Berkeley at the end, because he seemed .... uh, lonely? Huh. Maybe that just 'cause I'm weird...
| Title: "Hate"
Reviewed By: SummonerRekka03@aol.com On: April 24, 2004 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, if I smoked even I would have lit up after that!! Eee, pure genius! Can't BELIEVE that this only has (now) 3 reviews. Oh bejeezus, this one was hot. Loved the Dee pov!! Kinda feel bad for Dee tho. How can he hate something that made him go insanely horny over? ^ ^ Per. Fect.
| Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! I've been looking for BerkxDee power play pwp fic, just like yours for awhile now. Loved it!
| Reviewed By: Neeks On: April 12, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, delightful! Delightful! This is a very well-written, intriguing, original story - imagine that in FAKE fandom. Finally, a ficcer who knows the difference between wuv and sex. Lovely, observant characterization, mature view into things, hot sex; everything I look for in a PWP. Highly satisfying. Do keep writing! I will keep an eye on you from now on. This fic is one of my absolute favourites.
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