| "Cheese Quiche" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: decemberxvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I haven't seen an IxK fic this hot like.. ever. Only thing I would have added is more sex. ;) Haha. I mean, give her last hole some attention too. Bravo, keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Tanomoshii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOUR OTHER STORIES!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Tell 'quickening' to shut it.
Reviewed By: kittyluver7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell Quickenig to shut it! This story was freakin awsome! everbody else thinks so! Just A bit graphic (or maybe more than a bit) but still totally awsome! You should totally write another one I am a total sucker when it cums to this couple. I would change The ending of the series if i could, but sadly... I cant. Any way........ Great fic, hope to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: Blood_Cantor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story very muchy and have read it at least 30 times. I can't get over how cute you made kish. I adore him so you did good in my books.
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Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: KawaiiTine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is one of my favos! when are you gonna make more?!! ^o^
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Title: I really enjoyed this...
Reviewed By: animegeekfreak18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is strange... I enjoy Ryou and Ichigo together and yet I really liked this story! :P aybe it's because you wrote it so well or something... anyway awesome story! Keep writin' those wonderful sotries and until next time! ~Animegeekfreak18
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Title: How crude.
Reviewed By: Quickening [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just...not an enjoyable read. There was absolutely no emotion inspired (aside from disgust), and I found your choice of words and descriptions to be base and crude and a complete turn-off. This wasn\'t lovemaking, it was rape. No woman with an ounce of self-respect would LIKE being raped like that, no matter how you try to disguise it otherwise. My suggestion would be for you to study up on writing decent lemons before you attempt to write any more of them. Please, for the sake of people who actually CARE about the quality of the stories they read, and know what a decent lemon should actually be like.
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Title: Cheese Quiche
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny at the end. ^-^ lol. I hope to read your other fics!! Can\'t wait! I thought your fic was really good and funny! That was a bit sick when Ichigo was trying to do what Mint did though (C\'est degoutant! XP) Other than that, it was supremely good. Keep up the good work! Tchao!!
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:49 CST
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this is...something. *smies evily* bt having it as an 'i' fic got me wide eyed. but this is sure very i can't help it. very discriptive and th words... ah... but good work. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: KrysOfDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just...WOW. its...beyond perfect. the pairing is great, youre a great writer, and there werent any spelling and grammar errors! go you! (hugs) cant wait to see more fics from you! :D
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 17:37 CDT
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all i could say is... WOW.... arent these kids in like... 7th grade? i find it funny, but why did he just ass fuck her when he could've fucked her in all holes? well, it was great, and i noticed alot of ppl dont pay attention to tokyo mew mew... but my friend does. ^_^ keep writin.
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