| "Animal of the MONTH??? And Tohru cursed???" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Your idea is grate. Hell I loves your story! 10 out of 10! I'm adding your story to my favorites and putting you as one of my favorite authors! Congrats to you!
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Title: chp. 1
Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea, but it was a bit difficult to read with all the grammar errors. It's just a fan fic I know, but I think you may have went a bit overboard with Shigure's reaction to Kyou's comments concerning Tohru turning into an animal. Though I do agree Kyou would say something like that, I don't think he would mean it in a Tohru disgusts me way and Shigure would never spit on the floor it's too OOC for him. Please edit soon.
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is very good! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: __a__person__ On: April 15, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story! Since I know that you havent edited it yet, I just reviewed the grammer for the other chapters. Its going very well so far, I like it. Please continue... soon.
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