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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: June 10, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As i said before, if the review i gave you was an inconvenience, i apolgize in advance. I don't really care if Hiei's not the strongest one...as long as he's powerful. LOL. When did ranma defeat a god? Sorry...i haven't read ranma in a while. Also, can you tell me the pairings?
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Title: Finally some Friends
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: June 10, 2004 00:18 CDT
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Make Ranma weaker in power and skill then Yusuke or Heil but then his adaptabilty is no match againest Yusuke since Yuske can easily adapt his moves againest his foes.
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Reviewed By: S.M. On: June 04, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible-you only have one problem:you spelled Genkai's name wrong
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Reviewed By: Dark Jade On: May 26, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Love your story. I hope you write more. I would like hiei and botan to be togather, they make a wonderful couple. And Ranma I am not sure who he sure hook up with. But if the story has the cast from Inuyasha, I would pick kgome. Don't try to kill for that statement.
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: May 09, 2004 23:19 CDT
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I really like this story, but I would like Ranma to end up with Akane, after all, he really loves her. I'll understand if you don't, but please consider it. I don't think it'll turn out right if Ranma and Akane don't end up together. Except for that, the story's really great and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I'll be checking everyday until it does.
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Reviewed By: an author On: May 03, 2004 22:36 CDT
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i would like to state that spirit energy aka Reiki is stronger than KI for the simple fact that someone has to experience near death, or be attuned to the spirit world like Kuwabara to even manifest spirit energy let alone use it. KI can be used by anyone with enough training, while REIKI cannot be used or accessed so easily. just to give you a heads up. oh a bit of advice, use a spell checker, and clean up your writing prose. past tense all the way through for descriptions makes for easier reading. if you read a fiction book be it science fiction, fantasy or anything else of the like. it is written in past tense form. switching between past and present tense description makes it hard to follow and also is a NO NO in writing any kind of fiction.
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: May 02, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED the update. Hiei actually helping a stranger. But, i don't think that Ranma could be stronger than Hiei, Yusuke, or Kurama...why? Because Ranma IS merely Human...and the others are demons or PART demons...that means more stamina, strenght, and experience. This is NOT a flame. It's merely constructive criticism. If this brought any inconvenience to you, i apologize in advance.
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Reviewed By: an author On: May 02, 2004 13:27 CDT
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i like this fic. write more of it please. ranma/botan BIG THUMBS UP!! please write more.
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Reviewed By: thelvaenir On: April 22, 2004 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i liked it
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Title: great
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definately hilarious and it IS true that Genma did not have proof of those engagements. I vote Botan/Ranma and Hiei/Shampoo...why? Because seriously, their both power hungry and powerful... Kurama should probably be with Ukyo because their both very sensible and understanding. (Also, Ukyo used to be like a guy and Kurama is mistaken for a girl, ne?)
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Reviewed By: Demon Fox Thief On: April 17, 2004 16:36 CDT
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Please continue this, it's so cute! And maybe Ranma/Botan? Hiei/Ukyou? Weird! o_0 Where the hell did i get that? Wait...that might work. Not much mention of Yusuke or Kurama, ah well. Put them in the next chapter (especially Kurama) or I _WILL_ kill you!!!
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: April 17, 2004 11:16 CDT
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I would like to see Rando, the guy who is in charge of the Saint Beasts and last guy that Yusuke that was once a partner with Genki and togather won the Dark Tournment. Who will the be final two members of this team and it has to be main bad guy that is powerful and fighted againest Yusuke and hasn't been killed or destoyed by Yusuke yet. Of course the wind guy, yoyo kid and their partners will be in this tourtnment again.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 13, 2004 21:23 CDT
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It's very interesting. I'm a bit confused though, since it was under Inuyasha/Ranma, I wasn't counting on yyh group. Will there be Inuyasha characters as well?
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Reviewed By: spaceman1 On: April 13, 2004 21:20 CDT
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It's under Inu-Yasha on Mediminer. Other than that I LOVE IT!
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Title: Reviews for all so far
Reviewed By: Kouryu (Sign in? Nahhh.) On: April 13, 2004 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hmmm, you ask for reviews eh? Lesse, here's one. Voting for Ranma/Botan, definitely, and I can't decide who anyone else should be paired up with (*snickers at the thought of Hiei/Kasumi*). Oh, just to tell ya: Genkai -spelling Saotome -spelling *tsk tsk* Learn to use the keyboard Tere. ^_^ Anyways, so far, I definitely like this story. Great way to get Ranma out of all those marriages; I always liked Nodoko! *maims Genma for hurting Ran-kun* I swear, when I heard the details on Neko-ken, I cursed him to kingdom come! So, so far, I definitely like this. Just one thing: *dark aura flares up* Hurt Ryoga again and people WILL die. *snatches him away from any more erratic ki blasts that may happen* He's not an idiot...just directionally challenged. *glompsnugglehug* And he's made it to my Top Ten List out of all my harem. He's special. DUN HURT HIMMMMMMMMM!!! (You can tell I need my caffeine, eh?)
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