| "Until there was you...." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowfox564255 On: April 16, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way you did it but why put kikoy i dont like her but other then that it was goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a nice start. I like your first chapter. I liked your touch of making InuYasha hit the corner of the desk. That was cute, made me laugh. And making Totosi the chief..That at was a loop! I also saw how you managed to sneak most of the charaters in the first chapter. Congrats. I see much promise in this story. I can't wait for your next chapter.
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