| "Duo's 'Adopted' Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Well update already!!! And u havent visited or reviewed my fic in a long time!!
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME story and Im not even a fan of those two animes. Well keep updating and please R&R my fic!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 13 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u got to finish it please I'm beggin u!!!!!!!That is just to good.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 12 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 10 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Title: You Rule!
Reviewed By: Kou Kepani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job on each and every chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Cynthia On: July 15, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe your on my authors alert on FF and my fave. authors here so either way i know when you've updated sooo hurry and update :)
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have Usagi's so called friends work for Oz. When they heard that Mamaru got killed. They sent a mobile suit after them. That mobile suit will have one of Usagi's so called friend. Let Ami be the first one to attack the the Rei, Makoto, Minako, Hotaru, and so forth. Let Usagi and Trowa get married during the story not at the end. Also I want more Lemon scenes okay.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want you to have Usagi's friend attack the Gudam pilots one at a time. Like have Ami attack first in a moble suit one day and so forth. Have Usagi marry Trowa in the middle of the story.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. No I don't want anyone else there. Just have Usagi by herself okay.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Title: more plz!
Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo a death...COOLIE! and i wonder wut Usa will think of Catherin..i dont even kno if its spelt like that..haha!o well update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sailorcelestial [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey there... I was going to email you, but MM.org's being stupid. Anyways, I don't post here anymore, because I woudl TRY to sign on to MM.org to post, and would get someone else's profile and list of fanfics entirely. So, I only really post at fanfiction.net and my website: http://sio.midco.net/sailorcelestial Thanks for the review anyway!
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Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!UUUUUUUPDAAAAAAAAAATE!!PLLLLLLLZ!
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Reviewed By: liza On: April 27, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another kool chapter!! i was surpised mamoru came back into the picture! is he playing a major role or just a twist in things? hmmm i want to know what happens! i like trowa to not many fanfics of him with usagi great idea with creativity!!
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Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope u update soon.i cant wait till u do! ^_^
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Reviewed By: liza On: April 21, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good! doffrent to not many people do a trowa usagi fanfic! so i like it very much!
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Reviewed By: Childish little pixie On: April 20, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thats a great story keep updating
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(notloggedin) On: April 16, 2004 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this chapter and I am like, "did i really write this?" Please, tell us what you think!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 21:35 CDT
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If Woofie wasn't so adorable, and if he were real, I'd have to injure him for ruining such a beautiful moment. Damn Heero for pointing the gun at Usagi-chan, even if I am in love with him. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Cobra On: April 14, 2004 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. It's very good for a first one. FYI Sally's last name is Po and Quatre's middle name is Reberba.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:58 CDT
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i like the fic thusfar. sally's last name is 'po', and quatre's name is 'raberba'. hope that helps you out. ^_^
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