| "Dee's Grimm Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 22:59 CST
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Oh for Pete's sake! Racist? EVERYONE'S A LITTLE BIT RACIST!! *sings the song* But overall, WONDERFUL story! This reminds me of that episode of Rocko's Modern Life where Rocko, with Heffer's input, tells Filburt a story after he gets sick from getting caught in the blazing sun which morphs conveniently into pouring rain. For a blow-by-blow of the episode, feel free to email me!
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: S/W On: May 12, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear g-d, fix this: Removing the towel and placing it back in the bowel... --"Owwwww! You BASTARDS! I've got first-degree burns!" Confused, Ryo and Dee leaned down. What they saw shocked them: it was Ryo's gingerbread man sitting in an upright position...only, it had blonde color hair, blue eyes, dark skin, loose shoes, thuggie clothes...and it was alive. I'm not sure you realize how racist that sounds. I know you didn't intend it to be so, but just letting you know how people might take to that.
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Reviewed By: OdangoUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually more original than I thought! Since tru originality no longer exists, I think you did a great job of taking something that has been done (in your case, fairy tale parodies) and making it better. Not to mention sillier! :P This is such a fun fic. I hope Diana comes in, even though I don't like her, I still think she'd be good for the story.
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Reviewed By: OdangoUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You incorporated Kingdom Hearts That's hilarious! I did that for one of my stranger YGO fics, because it is in fact like Kingdom Hearts--even though it is actually based on a Hamtaro game. And you, err... certainly made JJ... himself. (I guess you could tell I wasn't a JJ fan, huh? -_-;) Gosh, this is so much fun. I'll be back to read Big Bad Berkeley! :D
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: JazzyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great job! But is that the end? I'm confused! ~JazzyGirl~
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Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: JazzyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! JJ is just too darn cute sometimes! And Berkeley threatening to shoot Dee if he didn't continue...hysterical! *off to read next chapter* ~JazzyGirl~
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Reviewed By: JazzyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* Chapter One was a hoot! I can just imagine Bikky as a gingerbread cookie! And Ryo falling asleep from Dee's story...too cute for words! *goes off to read next chapter* ~JazzyGirl~
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Title: Cute! ^-^
Reviewed By: OdangoUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cute story! I've actually read other fics for other various animes based on fairy tales. But, I never imagined Bikky to be the gingerbread man! I would have made him the ugly duckling, too! Okay, that was mean. Sorry. O.o I'm also sorry that I've only read chapter 1. But, this is still going on my favorites list! (BTW, I'm new to mediaminer. I am known as Bunny Meatball/Odango Usagi on FF.net)
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Title: Still Lovin' It
Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting even better and love the new shout out to Kingdom Hearts, that was such a cool game. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Response to Vidalark
Reviewed By: Kit_Yang On: April 14, 2004 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Arigatou! I'm glad you enjoyed my fanfiction...even though it is whack (random queen)hehehheheh...and yes, I LOVE petshop of horrors too! Count D is absolutely hilarious! Kit_Yang
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a cute and funny story. By the way loved the shout out to Pet Shop of Horrors, one of my fav anime and mangas!
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