"A Twist of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 07:34 CDT Comment/Review: please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 01, 2005 18:37 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story.
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Title: hi Reviewed By: re-a On: June 27, 2005 14:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: it was good but watch your spelling i had a very hard time with reading it.. you know us high class rednecks cant read to good... hahahaha.. well update your story... ^_^ oh an mehi she reads over it but i don't think she really pays any attention hahaha we love you any way cat.. love the fox.... hahah
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Title: YAY Reviewed By: Slushie On: September 04, 2004 11:58 CDT Comment/Review: Im so happy!! ^^ You updated just for me! ^^ I feel loved! Well yea, anyways...GREAT story! Keep up the good work. And thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: Slushie On: July 16, 2004 16:22 CDT Comment/Review: this is abosolutly the most....CUTEST THING I'VE EVER READ!!! omg, how did you come up with this? it's sooo kawaii!!! I looove it! its so adorable!! KEEP UPDATING so i can read more cuteness!! It's so cute that the YYH charcters have all grown up, and it's sooo cute how the kids act sort of like their parents (like how Keo is soo protective of Kitta and how he says Hn. lol just like his daddy!!^^) anywayz i love it, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 12:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh yei spellcheck pleaz.... cuz when i was readin i saw alot of misspelled words i guess it will always be the same
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 12:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i know who the insane man is...................
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Reviewed By: re-a On: June 08, 2004 12:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good story ^_^ oh yei PLEAZ!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: re-a On: May 11, 2004 20:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...... BY THE WAY I REALLY LIKED THAT STORY SO PLEAZ UPDATE SOON!!!! pleaz ^_^
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Reviewed By: re-a On: May 11, 2004 20:42 CDT Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.....!!!!!! PLEAZ THIS IS ONE I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE SO PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAZZZZ!!!!!!!! UPDATE.... pleaz ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 06:35 CDT Comment/Review: People I'lll give you a hint. It is some one on YYH! Also the one armed man is not on YYH, but if you think you know who that is let me know. and Inya keep your mouth shut! Inya: Fine.
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Reviewed By: Mehi(just not logged in) On: April 20, 2004 19:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GREAT!!! I liove the story, but ama acctually hurt. I think i'm gonna cry. NOT!!(hehe) And who is the insane man Inya never told me, if shes the one who created him. Maybe in fact it was you, or Gi (who has killed her character and is now Ana-something. I can pronounce it, but not spell), or Ke-o. So who is he! And there is a one armed man, too? you are so crazy. I'm I realy an ama? Don't make me cry(hehe). Oh and write more!!
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You're a nut, but I think you got most of the words right congrates!! anywho good job!!! And b-bye baka(hehehe)!
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 17:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Cool Kitta my pal not bugging I realize your spelling will NEVER be prefect but do you even read over them before you post? If not, try it. It would help alot. oh and dont get down over my comment. You know I think you are "The Greatest Anime Fanfic Author of All Time" If it was an award Id give it to you. hehe
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Reviewed By: -midnightdemon On: April 14, 2004 17:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: heres a review so please update soon.
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