Reviewed By: vixinkitsune On: April 15, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!! I love this story!!! Ryou's in it! Sorry I have a fetish for him but anyway, this is really cool. I loved how you told the story through the way all stories are told. I almost expected you to go into the 'flashback' way of talking, but that's been done before. You are an amazing writer. You have inspired me to write my own (not a fanfic) story. Please update soon, I can't wait.
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