| "Just A Moment" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: September 04, 2007 23:41 CDT
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you are missing words at the begining of the sentences and it makes it very annoying!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Just A Moment
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Just A Moment
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 24, 2004 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 22:54 CST
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aww!!! i liked this story, its cute! :D good job!
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Reviewed By: pulsing soul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 11:52 CDT
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Hi I like your fic a lot, there seems to be only one slight problem, how many chapters did you write, I kind of only read 11? Anyway, your fic is great, so keep on the good work! Pulsing soul
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 15:21 CDT
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yay!! i like it alot, but the things at the begning of the sentences near the side is missing. please continue!! i like it, just fix the error on the thingy thing,...
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 08:38 CDT
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good story but you are missing a few words. keep up the good work and update soon...
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Reviewed By: Aura Celest On: April 23, 2004 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yor idea so far seems to be a good one....but you're MISSING the beginning of almost every sentence. That makes your story very disjointed. Please fix this quickly, I liked what I could read, and would like to read it in full. Keep up the good ideas.
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