| "Unforgivable" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This was different. I enjoyed reading it very much. Although sometimes it was hard to tell who was think or talking. I hope to read a sequel to this and I really am surprised to see Gohan as such a asshole. Even as a doctor, family should always come first. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This was different. I enjoyed reading it very much. Although sometimes it was hard to tell who was think or talking. I hope to read a sequel to this and I really am surprised to see Gohan as such a asshole. Even as a doctor, family should always come first. Nice job.
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Title: Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Plyric *Damn MM won't let me login* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a shocking ending! Well, Tatoosh didn't leave me much to say since Tatoosh expressed in their review everything that's on my mind. I do want to throw in my extreme high amusement at the G/V kiss down in the "Hijinks" sections you always include at the end of the chapters. I seriously adored, as in loved!, the last three lines, especially the last line: "Vegeta: Good, then he won't see this. *kisses Kakarot* Goku: mrp???mmmm! *kisses back* Everyone else: @.@ *nosebleeds, passing out, etc.*" ROFL! I CANNOT wait for Forgiven and more Kuro's Escape!!! More, more!!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 16:32 CDT
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I'm not angry with you at all. It was a fitting way to end the fic. Of course I would like to know how things are going for them. Did Goten and Trunks find a way to be together with out the abuse. Did Vegeta and Trunks work things out? How are their daily lives going? Hopefully without too much pain and terror. What was up with Gohan, how did he react to being such a jerk? So I look forward to Forgiven, even though I have my worries about what you will do. ;)
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 05:00 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 55
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you haven't updated this is a while? I know, I know, I'm one of those god-awful people who never review, but I really and truly love this story, as well as Kuro's Escape. Please finish these two stories!!!
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: May 20, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short chapters but a solid story! I wonder whether it will be Kuro or Goten - or maybe even Vegeta? - who finally kicks Gohan's ass...
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Reviewed By: TJ On: May 02, 2004 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Your story is just brilliant. I can't wait to read more.
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