| "Yu Yu Knights" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: ITS BEEN LIKE A YEAR
Reviewed By: Piko On: August 31, 2005 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEACE PLEACE PLEACE.Im begging you pleace write some more.Its been a year.Shurely you have done all you'r work that kept you busy done now.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:28 CDT
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Interesting cross over I must say. I doubt I have ever seen anything like it before. The stroy is ok... But you might want to look up some more info on the Dark tournament... There were some inacurasies that didn't sit well with me in there. Also, it is slightly out of character, but that's alright I suppose... Well I do hope you continue it though, I mean this is interesting to see and you have gotten me curious... Although you might want to find a BETA, particularly one with a bit of knowledge on the Dark Tournament.
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Title: Y.Y.K.
Reviewed By: unamed On: April 02, 2005 14:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this one. I would like to read more. I hope U get the next chapter up soon Please?
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Reviewed By: Raynin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 17:41 CDT
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What about Rath? I would tink he would be more "Demons! Demons! Demons!" *singing* otherwise good, little OOC, but good. ^__^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, liked how Lykouleons fight turned out. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Raynin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 19:17 CDT
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How could you LEAVE it there? You evil person . . . for leaving it there . . . still a good writer though. . . . *sigh* I suck at this sort of thing.
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Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh PLEASE update soon!!! I love this!! Please please please update asap!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!! This is GREAT!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. Only wish it was longer, but short chapters are easier to write. Please update with the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Raynin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story. It's creative and fun to read mainly because Dragon Knights are my new obsession. ^_^ Not that I'm saying you're a bad writer, you're a good writer. Could you make your chapters longer? Unless it would take you a long time, then just leave it alone. Update soon! (Gosh, now I sound like a preppy little know it all. . . . Why are you still reading this? Get writing!)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. So Rath knows? Hmm... please update soon!
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Title: Please Continue!!
Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 08:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow!! This is great!! Finally a DK/YYH crossover...I love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Rath finds out Hiei is a demon... (my two fave characters)!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I'll be waiting for an update!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Finally, another update! Thank you! ^-^ I can't wait to see Rath's reaction to being on a demon island. Update as soon as you can please.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 18:42 CDT
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Thank you for actually continueing this! That really makes my day.^-^ Please update soon!
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Title: DK/YYH
Reviewed By: Kurama333 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES~!!! FINALLY~!! a yu yu hakusho and dragon knights crossover!! i love it so far, bbut you know whats wierd... i just decided like 3 mo9nths ago i would make a yyh/dk crossover. wierd... but mine wont be like yours, so you dont have to worry. im no copy striker. but, back to what i was saying. i like it, bbut i guess(to me, that is)- er, i dont know, the words you put for each character dont quite- er, they dont sound like them. maybe its cus its just the first chap, but thats oke. i still want to read lots more, SO U BETTER WRITE A CHAP TWO!!! XD
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! A Dragon Knights/Yu Yu Hakusho crossover! Well, I like it. Hope you put up a 2nd chapter.
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