| "The Silhouette" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: MARK WELLS On: July 27, 2015 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME SEX STORY
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:07 PST
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woiw....inspiration...cheak out my sess/kags fic please. i think i may need to add more stuff to make it offically nc-17. pointers are welcomed by email.
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Reviewed By: hissori tenshi On: July 06, 2004 23:40 PDT
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nice ending statement inu!!!hahahahahaha he got kags pist!!! so much for going all night!!! hahaha ooo i got the shivers, is that good? hahahaha
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 16:34 PDT
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Kool fic! luv it! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lemon fic. I enjoyed it. More please!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
niiiiiiice fanfic....sum work on spelling is needed sum but other than that it was oook!!
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Reviewed By: Reviewr On: April 24, 2004 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good lemon story!^_^
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Reviewed By: tempestwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 08:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great I really enjoyed it
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 15:38 PDT
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I liked it before, when it wasn't all bunched up. You really should try seperating it inot more paragraphs. It's far too hard to read that way: all scrunched up like that. Remember new person speaking=new line. Two people never speak in the same paragraph. A paragraph is a set of connected sentences that focus on a related theme. So you shouldn't write your story in two massive paragraphs like that. I hope my advice helped and I hope you take my advice. Ja ne!
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: KagomeDreamer1 On: April 18, 2004 07:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, Love it!!! Your spelling needs work but hey, who's perfect?
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Kagome+InuYasha On: April 18, 2004 07:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. You shouldItalics really check your spelling though.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 21:08 PDT
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oooo this was a really good fic. it was a nice one shot. ;)
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Reviewed By: kagome-chan-inu On: April 16, 2004 17:23 PDT
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Hope you update this very soon
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Reviewed By: kagome-chan-inu On: April 16, 2004 17:23 PDT
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Hope you update this very soon
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: ILoveSesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It indeed was an interesting story. I really enjoyed it. It's better than some pwp's I've read. You should really try to continue you the story. Oh, and please check your grammar. Thanks for writing the fic. ~~I Love Sesshomaru~~
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