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| "disgusting" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Poor T-chan T_T
Reviewed By: schwarzekigan On: March 11, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED that! Your style was wonderful...T-Chan was funny ("this is so dumb...") and so amourous....I wish that he could have stayed a human long enough in the Manga for us to actually see more than that (AMAZING) kiss though ^_^b (did you think he was sexy? I thought he was sexy..)
| Reviewed By: LDD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was EXCELLENT. Loved the writing style, very much in character to T-chan's thoughts, me thinks. Love how T-chan's character is portrayed here, I do believe you got him right on the ball. I also love your writing style, it's very nice, though at times slightly choppy, with switching from T-chan's descriptions to his thoughts. Other than that, the detail was, frankly, delicious. I loved it. Very nice piece you have here! And, of course, the slashy-goodness was excellent too. Thanks for the read!
| Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Considering what T-Chan attempted to do to Count D, I think it is appropriate that he suffer a little for his sins as you have shown here. He provides a lyrical descripion of D appropriate to a former chef, talking of cream, sweets and salt, so oddly enough I guess he's in character as a narrator.
| Reviewed By: Banance(im not signed in) On: April 16, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Poor T-Chan!!!! He needs some lovin'! *huggles t-chan, even though he'd probably bit my leg off* Aw, it was great!
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