| "Permafrost" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cute how Gateau calls Marron beautiful. ^-^ Marron seeemed rather inactive and unwilling, though. Oh well, they're acouple that it's hard to do much more than sex with... I would suggest you had this beta-read, no offense intended. Otherwise, great story...or PWP... ^.^
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Reviewed By: celestoceanna On: July 05, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I enjoyed the fic and found Geteau to be really sweet and not too forceful in your story. I rather enjoyed how he convinced Marron to be in the mood. Overall I like it and found it very sweet.
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Title: The Hobbit
Reviewed By: Kathleen Hebert On: May 30, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally Loved It! How did finals go?:^) That pairing is one of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: darling_162002@yahoo.com [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been searching *everywhere* for some good Gateau X Marron fics and this really hit the spot. Warm and sweet and oh so delicious. Please keep writing! There's too few of this pairing as it is. Thanks for the wonderful read!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 02:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
*drool drool drool* i've always loved Marron..he's just...soo..soo *looks at similar looking boyfreind* well..drop dead sexy..*glomps boyfreind and gets carried off for snuggle fest* WHEEE
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHE LIVES! oh my god, I thought you were never coming back! Your writing style has changed....alot. But in a good way. I almost didn't recognize it! you should update more often, but I know that you are very busy so I won't bug ya about it. great to hear from you again, update soon I hope! as always, luv ya!
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Title: Woo
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: April 21, 2004 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, well, must say this first: I absolutely love your fics for SH!! Snow Angel Imperfect? Awesome!! You need to do something more with that. And also Let Your Hair Down. You have mastered the fine art (??) of the pwp. Love ya for it. So yeah, please continue writing. This fic was good as well. But I really love Snow Angel, and some others to which I can't remember the names.
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