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| "The Battle!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Friends....
Reviewed By: Mann Town On: May 12, 2011 13:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Darkstalker X you need more paragraphs in the other chapters. Shorten the point at the beginning, I really like that Trey(my brother) is apart of your stories, he is a martial pro and now is learning Jujitsu with his friend/instructor Jordan. I can't wait to see what else you have in store, keep up the good work Sam | Title: best fanfic ever
Reviewed By: best fanfic ever On: January 02, 2011 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: sammyringo2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the characters. You did a great job!
| Title: Ill give you a full course...
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well,to start,fanfics are good specially when someone likes them,but to give criticm if it is what you want: The story is good,but at the first chapter you wrote too many times that he likes karate and such,when for me two or one time saying that he was the best at karate is enough... The other chapters... Well they are a bit too short,im trying to say that one paragraph isnt enough for a chapter,minumun two or three would make a perfection out of the chapters... Hope you liked your review and im not flaming...
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