"Bath Time" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Rena Takimoto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 23:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like it...But Sanzo's past self is Kannon and his aunt is Konzen. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just trying to help!
| Reviewed By: Battleaxe185 On: April 17, 2004 20:51 CDT Comment/Review: I like this a lot! Cute, nice one-shot! I'd make the quotes a little clearer, like putting who said them after, instead of before, and detail is ALWAYS good, but it was a really sweet waffy story! ;) Gotta love it!
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