| "Their Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Their Thoughts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 00:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: dfdfd
Reviewed By: Kissy Kissy On: November 25, 2004 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok At the bottom of chp. 2 you said that Pan was 22 on ch.1 you said or Gohan said she was 24 just telling you not trying to be mean!!!! it's good WRITE MORE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Starbrella On: May 31, 2004 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMGGGG!!! you have to updatee sooon!!! i soooo want to see what bulma has to say that this affair and all the other stufff! great job on your story!! i love it really! Keep up the good work and remember the update really really really really really sooon!!!!
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