| "Eyes of Amber & Crimson" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: Eyes Of Amber & Crimson
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: firemaidenlovr (not signed in) On: January 11, 2005 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, not bad at all. It wasn't too out of character. I'm assuming they are in the future or was this some sort of alterative reality of some sort? any way I like how this lemon wasn't overly rushed like most lemons tend to be. funny how most lemons have inuyasha and kagome doing it doggie style. keep writing!
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Title: Looooove it!
Reviewed By: Kali the red eyed hell hound On: July 13, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!You did it how I wanted it!Yay!!!!!Now this story should get goooooood!Woohoo!Hope ya update soon!Me got to see what happens next!Oh yea,i am Sango Pup and I wanted to say this,read my stories.they aren't doing to good so i want people i kno to read them.Thankies!
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Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good! Keep it up! I'll follow the story!
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Reviewed By: junsei On: July 10, 2004 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
a2, b3
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Reviewed By: Airy On: July 10, 2004 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i say they talk about it and only kagome becomes full demon
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Title: Answers
Reviewed By: Kali the red eyed hell hound On: July 09, 2004 21:25 CDT
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I think that they should talk about it in the mornin and Kagome should turn into an inu hanyou.half demon.He he^.^There...that's my suggestion.
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: Kali the red eyed hell hound On: July 09, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVe this story!I love it how they start out like this,all lemony!I love 'em!He he.Hope ya update sooooooooonnnnnnnn.Me can't wait!*runs around chanting'great story,great story*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 10, 2004 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay you got 15 update already now you got 16 rev. this is great just update this god damn thing.
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Title: Update please
Reviewed By: Dvalkyria On: May 09, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I've always liked stories that started out this way. Please update soon.
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: MessengerOfTheEnd On: May 09, 2004 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't worry about YasashiiAme's comment. Your story is starting out good. I'd really like to see an update since it is very cruel of you to leave off right there. If you feel like making the story even longer than necessary, then you might want to go into more detail about the past and such.
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I real like reading this your story I hope you put the next chapter up
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Title: unmeish
Reviewed By: unmeish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue. it makes me crazy when i get into a story to find that there's hardly a complete page of it.
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story and if u made it longer then it would explane alot, cause i kind a though they were in college or something, but if u make it longer u got a reader rite here.
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Reviewed By: pinkkitsune On: May 04, 2004 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
longer chapters! it was good.
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Reviewed By: sango rox On: May 04, 2004 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update please!
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Reviewed By: thepickledude On: May 04, 2004 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was good
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 03, 2004 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
hello there i'll get some friends of mine to review if that'll help plz update.over and out.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make it longer and yes please tell me what happenes next....
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is a good beginning. It would be nice to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 22:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it!!!!! And I think it could work as a longer story, so update like now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 22:28 CDT
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This doesn't seem very pratical, neither does the summary you posted at the end. Doesn't seem like it could go so easily into that either. It's too AUish; it seemed to me they lived in a college dorm (if you didn't say that), not a in a Western Lands palace.
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Reviewed By: ^_~ On: May 02, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_~ i like!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic please update soon and please make it longer
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